In the current competitive society, teenagers are also constantly influenced by their colleagues. This essay will argue that disadvantages of peer pressure such as individuals giving up or becoming selfish, outweigh the advantages it may bring to the young generation.
There are obvious disadvantages of being under constant influence by colleagues. Firstly, peer pressure may result in unwanted competition within a particular group and this may encourage them to outperform each other in a good way or another. When the competition is high, they may lose the sense of humour and may develop selfishness or even rage. Moreover, when the peer pressure is too much, some individual may not be able to cope up with it, resulting them to abandon their activities. For example, a young student may not want to return to study if he is under enormous pressure from colleagues.
Those who oppose may say that peer pressure is a positive trend owing to the fact that it may encourage them to outperform others, making them better at what they are doing. For example, if they are studying, they would study harder to become top talented in the class. However, this would bring more harm than good as it deprecates human and moral qualities of young generation. Qualities such as being helpful to each other are more valuable for a better community.
To conclude, pressure from the peers may bring more drawbacks such as deprecating human qualities or making teenagers giving up what they are doing, compared to benefits such as encouraging them to outperform others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05813953488 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79582055636 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531007751938 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9270183782 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216651780783 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856762993139 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757870840952 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159583461561 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982285943543 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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