Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. Causes and solutions.
With the changes in time, lifestyle of an individual has undergone changes dramatically. This essay will suggest that poor parenting is the root cause of this phenomenon and suggest that public awareness Campaign is the most viable solution, followed by reasonable conclusion.
The principle cause of this problem was the poor discipline, where they were upbringing. Many father and mother do not have enough time to look after their kid’s behaviour from their primary age of school. As a result, on the age of young ones, they do not give respect to elders and teachers, behave rudely with them. Along with this, they do not have their grandparents, who educate their kids the values of social skills , which they learnt from their the past experience. for example, a Cambridge university found that 1 out 3 student in the town refuse to live with their parents after finished their schools because of the inclined to the western culture.
The most practical solution to this problem is a government-sponsored awareness campaign. An effective advertising campaign could warn such type juvenile on their childhood , and teach them lessons of practical skills which are essential for make them a respected person of the society. Moreover, authorities can also send them in quarantine for few months, where they can learn respect and humbleness for others by keeping them under strict supervision. For instance, The British government reveals that, they had opened many quarantine hostels to cut the harassment problems occurred in the schools.
To conclude, above causes shows that caregivers not able to give enough care and legacy to infants and eventually it would not make them good civilian. Nevertheless, law enforcement agencies can also send their ancestors to attend the parenting classes before their child starts kindergarten.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2866894198 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83634635971 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61433447099 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4010726676 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.153846154 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0624994243047 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246539182997 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0237718507991 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0344593273507 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104863644233 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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