“Your first impressions when you meet someone are always right.”
Do you agree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
There is an ideological verbalisation that first impression is always the last impression, in other words, the thought that an individual form when meeting someone for the first time is always precise. There are some denizens who believe that the first meeting gives out a lot of information about the true intentions of someone. In this essay we will argue as to just by interacting once, does not reveal the true nature of an individual.
To embark on, the initial impression of person divulges a great deal of information about its personality and behaviour. The way a person dresses, speaks, walks, reacts to a situation helps to have deeper understanding about the nature of a person. For example, in the recruitment process the interviewer forms an initial opinion of the interviewee on the basis of his dressing style, speaking skills, listening abilities, attitude and confidence.
On the contrary, there is a common belief that Never Judge a book by its cover. The first impression just provides a glimpse of somebody’s personal character and does not reveal its true nature. Maybe he can be deceitful, unreliable and untrustworthy. A person originally behaves in a polite, modest and friendly way after meeting someone but its true identity is only disclosed after knowing the person for a long time. For instance, if a person is not smiling or talking to anyone in the party cannot be labelled as arrogant and unfriendly, maybe he is not well or there is some problem in his family. This can only be revealed if an effort is made to interact with the person.
To conclude, I strongly agree that before jumping on the conclusion about the behavioural characteristics of a person one should have a strong connection and communication for a prolonged time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01013513514 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98912802037 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4332916817 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.076923077 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113693621853 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403463053381 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451525537701 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680729236824 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497741799366 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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