Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
Provide relevant examples if necessary.
It Is often argued that jobs offering higher salary is more advantageous than job satisfaction. In my opinion, I strongly agree that job satisfaction plays a pivotal role as compared to remuneration.
Many individuals select occupation based on the wages it is offering. They believe that a job offering a handsome pay makes them satisfied with their work irrespective of the profile. Moreover, they have an opinion that money is essential for survival and growth. By earning a good payment they will not only be able to purchase all the necessities in life and fulfill all the needs but will also be able to support their family financially. To elucidate, people by earning a good amount of salary from a job will be able to pay for expensive education for their children.
However, job satisfaction is most essential as it gives people a sense of fulfilment which no money can guarantee. Pursuing one’s interest will bring pleasure and feeling of satisfaction among people. They will feel more motivated working. Moreover, there is a direct relation between job satisfaction and productivity. Those who love their job and feel a sense of connectivity with their work will excel in their career. They will work with more enthusiasm which will help them to get promoted to higher position and construct a prosperous future. To exemplify, many researchers are famous and popular not because of appealing wages but because of their passion an interest.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that job contentment is the key deciding factor in selecting a job than earning for people as they will fell motivated and satisfied with their work and will eventually grow in their professional life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'make'?
Suggestion: make
...ieve that a job offering a handsome pay makes them satisfied with their work irrespec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09318996416 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91535146448 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530465949821 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.767349213 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118414286936 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497211343757 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670617300675 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107706051139 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816706980161 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.