Your friend’s son is going to your country for his holiday, she want him to stay in your home, but you cannot accommodate him.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter.
1) Apologize to your friend
2) Explain why he cannot stay in your home
3) Give her suggestion for her son’s arrangement during his holiday
Dear Sana,
Really pleased to receive a letter from you after so long. We are also doing good. In your letter you mentioned about your son is planning a holiday to our country and you would like him to stay with me during his visit to Sydney. It would have been a great idea if planned early this year, unfortunately it would not be possible now. I am extremely sorry that I cannot accommodate him in my house.
I hope you would remember about the new company that I started recently, solar energy solutions, is going through huge loss, and I am not financially stable to continue the luxury life of staying in a 3-bedroom villa in Sydney. So, I had to shift to a small 1-bedroom apartment in the country side. That’s the only reason that I cannot accommodate your son in my apartment with no extra to space to stay comfortably.
I have a few suggestions for his affordable stay in Sydney. There is long-term stay accommodation option near the city centre, that’s very economical and perfect for enjoying the city life on a holiday trip. There will be a studio apartment available in very cheap price. There is one more option, my colleague is looking for a pain guest, if he is fine with sharing his apartment. My colleague lives near us, if he stays there we can catch up for some meals together.
I hope you would understand my situation. Do give him my contact details and ask him to call me anytime for any help.
Best Regards,
Fariha Anwar.
- Your friend’s son is going to your country for his holiday, she want him to stay in your home, but you cannot accommodate him.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter.1)Apologize to your friend2)Explain why he cannot stay in your home3)Give her sug 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...partment available in very cheap price. There is one more option, my colleague is loo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59090909091 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61261508373 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594696969697 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9497301269 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291028456754 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786058296138 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103673731534 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163520172446 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807131540364 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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