Imagine that you are going to visit a new city, which one of the following ways do you think is the best way to know the city in a short time?
• Visit historic sites
• Go to shops and markets
• Enjoy the restaurant and spend time in café
In today’s modern life, knowing people of a different culture is a priority when considering the importance of its on the future of the world, that requires all of us be more aware of what is going on around us in order to be able to make the world a better place for living and communicating. In this regard, many believe that visiting historic sites of a new city can provide us with the most possible information about the culture of that society, while other believes that attending at shopping centers is a better way. Being at restaurants and café is also another choice. I, personally, hold the view of the second group for a couple of reasons, on which I will elaborate in the following essay.
To begin with, attending in shops and markets will provide us with a lot of information about society member’s priorities in their life. In fact, glancing at what the stores are filled by, we can easily understand what is defined as a priority in their society. For example, in a society that the majority of its members spend their money on cloths, and to be more specific, on which that make them superficially more credible, it is perceptible that appearance matters a lot to them. In contrast, in a society that intellectual issues are their main concerns, they probably spend their most money on books, that bring them knowledge in their life. As a result, having carefully observed what their stores are filled with, and what they tend to buy most, enables us to know the priority of society members very well.
Furthermore, being on markets also informs us about the relations of society members. In fact, individuals prefer to be accompanied for their shopping’s with the one who is in charge of their expenses, or who is their close friend. So, by looking at who are they with, we can understand that who they prefer to communicate. To be more specific, in a society that majority of them do their stoppings with their family members, it can be implied that they have close relations with their family members, and in fact, family is a important element of that society. On the other hand, in a society that people are in markets with their friends or even they are alone, it is comprehensible that being independent is a important factor in that society.
In conclusion, with all this taken into account, attending in bazaars and observing people in that environment, not only can we understand what is trend and priority in that society, but also we can be informed of how their relationships are established.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, second, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73755656109 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73704793151 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43665158371 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 17.0 4.94265232975 344% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.491971111 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.6 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4666666667 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0817069997235 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336498124534 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400388460112 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547068198713 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611598534319 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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