10.which one do you think is the most important factor that affect the lasting time of the friendship?
(1)help each other when one is in emergency
(2)have the same interest
(3)trust each other completely
Friendship, as the relationship between people, can be affected by many factors. To last the friendship is usually not an easy matter. There are three suggestions given above, and for me, I totally prefer the second one that having the same interest can affect the lasting time of the friendship.
To begin with, helping each other when one is in emergency really matters, but usually the fact is that we do not have the ability to help them. We are only average people, not the god. So, there is no possibility that we can do everything and help any friend in need. For example, my friend is weak in the Math, and I am not good at math too. How can I help him if I just get the poor grades. Therefore, this advice is very fundamental, but is not pretty practical.
Besides, trusting each other are really key to the friendship, nevertheless, the problem comes from 'completely'. As friends, we are ought to trust others because only if we trust others, others will trust us in return. However, the society is very complex and even dangerous, especially to the students which take step to the society lately. Some risks, such like being robbed or being stolen which we do not prevent will just happen to us in the case that we trust friends with bad behaviors. If we trust others completely without conditional thought, it is likely that we will be deceived for money some time or other until we make friends with a bad guy. In this way, our safety will be threatened. So, it is silly for us trust others completely.
Finally, having the same interest does not have such problems and can also strengthen the friendship. People make friends from the acquaintance usually have the same interest because they need to talk to communicate. When someone's topics are boring or elusive to the other, the other will have no desire to continue any more. So, the same interest is not only the effect, but also the selection which means that we choose the friends who have the same topic and usually ignore the others who do not share the same interest. Due to this, the same interest can affect the friendship mostly.
To sum up, different people have different attitudes. And I think what matters is that interest is the most important thing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, nevertheless, really, second, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65491183879 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48647911836 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493702770781 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3305316335 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.347826087 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2608695652 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04347826087 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391688641187 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102788107653 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08382432806 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195322688107 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450253391684 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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