Teachers are the people who help others to grow up. But, as much as the students grow up, they easily ignore their graces. I agree with the statement that younger people nowadays do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past. These are the following reasons: the puberty for younger people gets severe to control, students can get information that the teachers have from online, and they do not have the opportunity how to treat superiors.
First of all, most of students have severe puberty when they are studying. At that time, they do not know the differences between emotion and attitude. During the puberty, they are out of control; however, controlling students is teacher’s duty. Students treat teacher with rude attitude that is based on their feeling. In the other words, students are in the process how to deal with their emotion by having experiences even if it is with teachers.
Secondly, younger people are able to have lots of information even though they do not have ability to distinguish the data. As much as they can learn from media, they do not rely on teachers. Putting it differently, learners lose the reason to treat them as educator. In some cases, the tutors can have old reports and pupils make a conservative estimate.
Younger generations have less experiences how to deal with people who are older than them due to most of parents are working together. If the kids have time with their parents, it means, they have someone who discipline them right away for every single time. Differently, if they can not have advice right away, correct on them frequency is important for the children as forgetting, they are not able to know what mistake they have made. They can not learn the attitude to accept the advice as well.
To sum up, the society that they are living now makes them do not respect their mentor. Finally, I believe that younger people do not respect their teachers than in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
...ow to treat superiors. First of all, most of students have severe puberty when they are study...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun experiences is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...e estimate. Younger generations have less experiences how to deal with people who...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
...h people who are older than them due to most of parents are working together. If the kids have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as for, first of all, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79881656805 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44956121128 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46449704142 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5612972742 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3684210526 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356629036369 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136199562051 0.076458572812 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144911854971 0.0737576698707 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243530199846 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136373753512 0.0645574589148 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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