Do you remember school uniforms in your school days? How do you remember about the uniforms? When I was a student with school uniform I thought school uniform is unnecessary. Why? Because I didn’t think that uniforms are personality and comfortable to wear. But now I think that uniform saves money to buy clothes and very practical.
To begin with, when I was a student I wanted to wear pretty clothes. Finally I could wear what clothes I wanted but that was too expensive to buy even minimal needs. Let’s think about buying only necessary clothes. We need at least 7 pieces of clothes. However, students are interested in clothes and trend changes quickly so they want more and more clothes without thinking about the clothes they have. It takes a lot of money to buy clothes. Therefore school uniforms save money.
Next, if we don’t wear school uniforms, we have to decide what we should wear every day. We spend time choosing clothes. Steven Jobs also said that because of the time choosing clothes, he bought only the same clothes. If we wear the school uniforms, we don’t waste time for pick up clothes.
For these reasons, I prefer to wear school uniforms because I think school uniforms will be able to focus on study more.
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- Many people believe that greed or desire to have more wealth than other people have is a bad characteristic people who are greedy are often considered selfish or unkind However some people argue that greed is actually a good characteristic for a person be 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All children should be required to take a foreign language class from the time they start school until they begin university. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...How do you remember about the uniforms? When I was a student with school uniform I t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...tudent I wanted to wear pretty clothes. Finally I could wear what clothes I wanted but...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nally I could wear what clothes I wanted but that was too expensive to buy even m...
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Suggestion:
...en minimal needs. Let's think about buying only necessary clothes. We need a...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...It takes a lot of money to buy clothes. Therefore school uniforms save money. Next, if...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, therefore, as to, at least, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 217.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8202764977 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46641524187 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 618.680645161 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9388472772 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5294117647 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7647058824 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288930011108 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106420751946 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11046062382 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199925188394 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669152917186 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 86.8835125448 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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