agree or disagree: Large cities should ban cars from the city center
Cars are the most commonly used transportation source nowadays, everyone nowadays like to have a car as personal vehicle because it makes their life easy. In my opinion, large cities should ban cars from city center. I feel this way for two main reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, car ban in city centre will help in creating a healthy environment. To live a healthy life is of utmost importance for human beings, and as we all know vehicles are the major source of pollution these days. Hence, if government is approaching towards taking strict action like banning cars in mid city areas, then it is for the benefit of public at large. My own experience is a good example for this. In the capital city of my country India, there was an alarming increase in the pollution, which caused an epidemic of lung diseases in the city, some people have lost their lives. It was so horrible situation to handle for government, thus government took step to ban vehicles in the city center area. If the government had not took these majors to protect the lives of public, many had been lost their lives.
Furthermore, It will help public to save time. The city areas are usually conjusted, so if a lot of cars visit the city center daily, they produce myriad of traffic, which will create chaos in the center. Thus people have to wait for longer hours to reach their destinations. As I said above, government took the step of banning cars for the benefit of public. Before this step by government I used to take around one hour to reach my office in the city center, but after this significant measure, it took me just twenty minitues to reach my office. Therefore, I could mange to save plenty of time for myself with I used to spend in gym to do some exercise to keep me fit and fine.
In addition to aforementioned point, I would like to mention about a research conducted by CSR institute in India. The discovered results suggests that sixty percent of the pollution in the cities are created by the use of cars and fourty persent by other kinds of vehicle.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that there should be strict ban on the use of cars in city center. This is because it will help in creating a healthy surrounding to live in as well as help public to save their precious time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 746, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
... center area. If the government had not took these majors to protect the lives of pu...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'suggest'.
Suggestion: suggest
...titute in India. The discovered results suggests that sixty percent of the pollution in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55131264916 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48081938679 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510739856802 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6706131464 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.35 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331204656896 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118017558372 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171716122632 0.0737576698707 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209832915801 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873295330156 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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