Do You Agree Or Disagree With The Following Statement? It Is Better To Be A Member Of A Group Than To Be The Leader Of A Group. Use Specific Reasons And Examples To Support Your Answer
The ability to perform well with a team plays a pivotal role in enhancing one’s personality. There can be different roles in a team, sometimes it can be a group member and sometimes a group leader. In my opinion, to be the leader of the group is better than to be a group member. I feel this way for two main reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
The first exquisite point to be mention is that leadership position helps in our personal growth. Personal growth in terms of skills like decision making skills, communication skills, inter-personal skills etc. Indeed, group members are the building blocks of a team, and without them there is no existence of a team. But as far as the duties and responsibilities are concerned, there is always a comparatively better scope at leadership positions.
My own experience is a very good example for that. When I was doing my masters in public health, I was the team lead of field trips to public health centers of villages. To play my role effectively I had to communicate with various state, district and village authorities to make the visits successful. I had to plan the whole trip, prepare check lists etc. As a result the experience of these kinds of work created a much advanced personality of myself.
Another reason which deserves some words is that is it helps in your professional growth. When some have handled the leadership roles, it opens up the gate of a great deal of leadership job opportunities to them. As I said above, I made an advanced personality of myself by working at leadership positions. This is what the employers demand, when they look of employees of the organisation. For example, once my brother applied for a leadership position in a multi-national company. He easily got that position while others did not, because he had the experience of leadership roles in many other organisations. Hence, he could make it to get his dream job, with good position and great salary package.
In addition to aforementioned points, I would also like to mention about a research conducted by CSR institute in India. The discovered results suggest that seventy percent of the people think that leadership positions are better than group members.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that to be a leader of the group is better than to be a group member. This is because in not only helps in you personal growth but also proliferates your professional growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, so, well, while, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84248210024 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94336042074 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522673031026 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.3788576766 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5416666667 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4583333333 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272516984068 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766929899698 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130601481173 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159554956318 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145453869967 0.0645574589148 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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