Agree or Disagree: In order for a business to succeed, it must put more money in advertising.
There are various reasons for become succeed in business; however, the presence of some factors are accounted as of the absolute necessities in the path of prosperity. A plethora of people is in the conviction that investment on advertisement brings accomplishment for the business. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that aware management, appropriate funding, and other elements play the crucial role in this regard. I am of the opinion that, advertising has a variety of advantages for the company, and the following explanation will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, there are some subjects which become an integral part of today’s world. Undoubtedly, branding and popularity is an imperative issue for modern people. Indeed, they have the tendency toward buying the things that are known as the best choice, no matter whether it is really the best material that they can have with that amount of money or not. It is where the role of advertisement is raised as the key contribution in order to familiarize public with the product in the first stage and after that promote their customers that this goods or service can be the best thing that anyone could have. Consequently, no one can overlook the extent of importance of ads in this circumstance.
Another vital fact that should be taken into consideration is that the function of promotions is not restricted to conscientious such as when one person watches a TV advertising. In fact, the majority of these promotions affect to people unintentionally. It means that a person does not know why he opts one product rather than another one, although they are seemingly alike. Therefore, business should utilize these strategies to influence profoundly on their users mind. Admittedly, getting the desire result is not as easy as it seems, and the business will not achieve to send its message to its intended target in a society without having experts who guide the process of adverting in its favourable way.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that advertising is an undeniable segment for each successful business because it helps the company that not only represent the product and the name of it but also unconsciously makes effect on people’s mindset about purchasing their productions. Of course, eliminating the other contributed component will not a wise option as it is the total elements which lead to success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 553, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...after that promote their customers that this goods or service can be the best thing ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'in fact', 'of course', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233183856502 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.150224215247 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0650224215247 0.0866891130778 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0515695067265 0.046263068375 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.042600896861 0.0685040099705 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141255605381 0.118717715034 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0336322869955 0.0351676179071 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97634586054 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0179372197309 0.0309702414327 58% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.127802690583 0.0887237588012 144% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0201793721973 0.0209618222197 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.02466367713 0.0139019557991 177% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2467.0 2387.08602151 103% => OK
No of words: 403.0 408.028673835 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12158808933 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369727047146 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287841191067 0.251872472559 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198511166253 0.174417080927 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141439205955 0.112833075102 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97634586054 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570719602978 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 67.1194981118 59.2087087015 113% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 25.1875 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6862809116 48.84282405 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.1875 120.699889404 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1875 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 53.9716191067 45.7405998639 118% => OK
Elegance: 1.66972477064 1.45489161554 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164711528411 0.300154397459 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111468280254 0.103427244359 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.093246014013 0.0752933317313 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.540492467097 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.193996237976 0.151897553556 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753306876856 0.114077575197 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435411883919 0.0781384742642 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.423562608185 0.336927656856 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0722785199369 0.067059652881 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122660613798 0.210909579961 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292667569708 0.0618886996521 47% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.