Agree or disagree? Visiting museums is the best way to get information about a country.
Visiting foreign countries as a tourist is among the most enjoyable vacations I know. Foreign countries are interesting in many aspects which are not irrecoverable in a single trip. A country has many specific features like culture, language, art, cuisine, architecture and so on that requires a long time stay to visit and gain knowledge about all of them. Museums are like gist that consist a compact information about many details of a country, museums are well organized and stratified. For a tourist who wants to know much about a country in a limited time, attending to museums is the best. Museums are well organized, including. Paramount of a specific subject and have an elaborated information about the things kept there
To begin with, most of people on voyage have short time stay in a country or city, As a result they are not able to spend too much time. Moreover people have special areas of interest, some enjoy historical statues while others are pleased with visiting great paintings. To this end, museums are stratified in different subjects and they are categorized in diversity fields. The objects are sorted in chronological order and it’s very easy to find a desired one. For example Louvre museum in Paris, As the biggest museum in the world has a very well ordered category for art works which made it so easy to access.
Secondly, the most aesthetic and prime works of a country are kept in museums. It is a must to see the best local artifacts of a country, they are worth visiting. Although there is strict rules in the museums for visiting great art works and the surrounding areas are usually crowded with people and tourists, It’s wonderful to see them in real, instead of in a picture. For example Monalisa the artwork from Da Vinci is placed in Louvre museum which attracts millions of visitors every year. The hall which the painting is placed on is the most congested hall among the parlors of museum.
Thirdly, there are lots of useful information available for visitors of museums. These information are presented by different means, such as stands beside the objects, audio podcasts that a narrator talks about the history and details of the artwork. The information given to visitors are always free but if someone needs a leader to describe the objects elaborately, it’s usually not free of charge. Through the process of visiting a museum, one can gain lots of new useful information about the history of that country.
To put in a nutshell, museums are best places for travelers to take tons of information in a few days. They are well organized, incorporate precious artworks and give helpful information parallel. I personally visit the museums of the city I’ve been visited firstly and then the other touristic places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...vacations I know. Foreign countries are interesting in many aspects which are not irrecover...
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Line 2, column 16, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...t the things kept there To begin with, most of people on voyage have short time stay in a cou...
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Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ey are not able to spend too much time. Moreover people have special areas of interest, ...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... a country are kept in museums. It is a must to see the best local artifacts of a count...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are strict rules'?
Suggestion: there are strict rules
...ntry, they are worth visiting. Although there is strict rules in the museums for visiting great art w...
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Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'These informations'?
Suggestion: This information; These informations
...tion available for visitors of museums. These information are presented by different means, such ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2318.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93191489362 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67398648315 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502127659574 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3002728851 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.782608696 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4347826087 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08695652174 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28584932157 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847491507225 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697373918713 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170650408698 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654137324515 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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