All people earn to learn to able cope with this hard world. Whether, individuals should learn from those who have same level of education like their friends or students in the same grade in school, or its better to gain knowledge from those who are more educated like their parents of professors. This can be weighted in different aspects. Admittedly, some people think, colleges and friends are more influential on people. Moreover, students immerse in same atmosphere and condition, therefore, people, especially teenagers impact easily by them. In my vantage, I believe, people learn more from others who have higher level of education. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
First, and essential reason is, parents, or managers have a tremendous information ang knowledge, since, these people have higher level of education than people how want to teach them. Furthermore, they also have a wide scope and base of kills and experience from their long time working and long life. Therefore, they are enable to teach students or people who want to learn by giving them a suitable subjects and perfect advices. For instance, my daughters used to ask her opinion friend about any thing, like when she wants to buy cloths or which movie suppose to watch in movie theater. Some time , I ask her whey she did not ask me about my point of view, she says, I am from different generation hence, I can not understand her. In fact, I can help her with many things like find good quality brands and with fair price better than her and her friend, because I have more life experience than them.
Second, professors and teacher can explain lesson to their student more affectively correctly. This is mainly due to the fact that, they are experts in their field . In addition to a huge information that they got from long years work. as we can not deny, students can understand well from their teacher more than from other student.
On top with, the statement is not as persuasive as it stands. This is based on expositions mentioned above. high educated level and more experience people able to learn things better than those who have same level or same age.
All people earn to learn to able cope with this hard world. Whether, individuals should learn from those who have same level of education like their friends or students in the same grade in school, or its better to gain knowledge from those who are more educated like their parents of professors. This can be weighted in different aspects. Admittedly, some people think, colleges and friends are more influential on people. Moreover, students immerse in same atmosphere and condition, therefore, people, especially teenagers impact easily by them. In my vantage, I believe, people learn more from others who have higher level of education. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
First, and essential reason is, parents, or managers have a tremendous information ang knowledge, since, these people have higher level of education than people how want to teach them. Furthermore, they also have a wide scope and base of kills and experience from their long time working and long life. Therefore, they are enable to teach students or people who want to learn by giving them a suitable subjects and perfect advices. For instance, my daughters used to ask her opinion friend about any thing, like when she wants to buy cloths or which movie suppose to watch in movie theater. Some time , I ask her whey she did not ask me about my point of view, she says, I am from different generation hence, I can not understand her. In fact, I can help her with many things like find good quality brands and with fair price better than her and her friend, because I have more life experience than them.
Second, professors and teacher can explain lesson to their student more affectively correctly. This is mainly due to the fact that, they are experts in their field . In addition to a huge information that they got from long years work. as we can not deny, students can understand well from their teacher more than from other student.
On top with, the statement is not as persuasive as it stands. This is based on expositions mentioned above. high educated level and more experience people able to learn things better than those who have same level or same age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80474934037 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47228212205 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532981530343 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0616703752 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.05 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.95 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.531555704674 0.236089414692 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143096300793 0.076458572812 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182697377545 0.0737576698707 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346548020089 0.150856017488 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.223015013624 0.0645574589148 345% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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