It is not easy to tell the truth to keep the strong relationship, but it is so much easy to tell a lie. But telling a lie and hold the relationship for long time will be fragile. Relationship associates with good understanding and believe between two persons, if someone breaks this rule intentionally or unintentionally, it will be hard to gain its original taste. So, I bolster this statement that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Now a day, some people build their relationship with telling lie because they have no courage to tell the truth, mainly, they try to manage the present situation without considering any future. It is true that telling a lie, will make the relation well for a certain time but one cannot hold this brittle relationship for long time. Telling a lie, it will make you relax for some time but it will create a profound spot on your trustworthy.
To build up a good relationship, it needs both kind hearted and bold hearted person because only a person such quality has the potential to manage all the situations that usually create within the relationship. Being honest and trustful are so much inevitable for a good relationship. If you don’t believe in you partner or friend, it is true that they will not trust you and they are trying to avoid you or they are trying to hide the truth from you.
Thus, the crucial way to build up a strong relationship is to tell the truth otherwise it will ruin the relationship. Some people in this modern era don’t believe the relationship and they are taking casually but they don’t know the benefit of this relationship. Actually, relationship changes our thought and makes us to believe and trust on another person because those qualities are so much unavoidable in our career and also in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 452, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble in our career and also in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, thus, well, it is true, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.796875 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8822446087 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48125 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2763242049 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323200512966 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142458240753 0.076458572812 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184207365414 0.0737576698707 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206550382827 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154939399549 0.0645574589148 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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