Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
There are certain factors people take into consideration in any healthy relationship. People might look for honesty, altruism, loyalty, compatibility, dependency. Anyone who wishes to be in relationship looks for the above-mentioned qualities or combination of such good traits. What quality one particular individual would take into account is a subjective and relative matter.
Although I would love to have qualities like altruism, compatibility in person I am dealing with, I would consider being honest as the most important factor in my relationship. Opposite of this is lying and if someone lies she is either hiding something from me or afraid of telling me the truth.
In any relationship of mine, the person I am dealing with must be honest. Even if she does something wrong that I would not like, she would better confess and do not lie about it. If I find out the truth from some other person then it would be much more unpleasant. I would prefer to listen to the unpleasant truth from the person I am in a relationship with rather from some third person. In that case, how can I trust that person again? How can I ever believe that she has enough confidence in me to forgive her and can carry the relationship from there? I could not trust the person anymore if the person I am dealing with thinks I can’t handle the truth. So, there is no point in continuing the relationship further.
I would love to see the person to be understanding, thoughtful, loyal and altruist, but an instance of opposite of these behaviors would not hurt me as much as dishonestly would. For me, dishonesty is the ultimate factor in not to rely on that person. Therefore honesty would be my first concern and the most important consideration in a relationship.
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 66
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, honestly, if, look, so, then, therefore, third, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81848184818 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97984530585 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528052805281 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.308694309 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8823529412 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200930729081 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708248760311 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077500105955 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125403280731 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265047310002 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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