Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
At present the work ratio and speedy nature of intricate works are so huge that if anyone fails to get embellishment in his work, he eventually is to be deemed as an inefficient person. However it is not his fault, it is seen as the human nature and others surrounding pressures as reason of failure. This is why I do believe that you can do well if you have a focus on limited works. Therefore, I will substantiate the above statement in the positive direction with proper logic.
To embark on, propensity is the main issue in this case to discern the view of why people fail to perform well in case of overload works. To illustrate more, I will share my experience. When I was a 1st year student of college in 12th class, we were taught math, physics and chemistry. But my felicitation and interest were only based on mathematics. As a result, what one can hope from this jumble situation? No doubt student will not cut a good figure in the exam. Likewise, I also got poor grades in all subjects as I could not use my attention in mathematics well. In the long run, my propensity and wish to perform math well went in vain. Basically such mixture of learning system spoils the student's mentality to learn his predilection based subject which eventually yields poor performance in his career. Not only me, but also my friends who were boss in physics in 12th class, they lost their last ended interest in physics due to the over pressure of all subjects.
Furthermore, there is a limit of brain capacity of a student to inculcate the concept of different areas of study. What I mean by this is that, every student has a space of brain upon which if he is reared, he will master it. Otherwise, he will not process different subjects into his brain. For instance, my friend was weak in talent. Conversely he was adamant to learn agriculture study. In this respect, what deprecation is that he was always captured by his tuition class and college classes. In effect he could not take up all pressure into his mind. Finally his brain power was at a stake and he left study for two years. Therefore it is crystal clear like water that if a student were to press lot of things, he would lose efficiency for not his capacity, rather his brain processing area.
Last but not least, most of the times, students and job holder don't get enough time to accomplish lot of duties. In effect of pressure from boss or teachers impact on the others works. For example, I am working in a private firm where every day I have to monitor lot of files. In the office time, I have no time to associate others people, even if I can't recheck files after completing work. So, in last three days, I made three wrongs in three files. In this consideration, I have full aplomb, if office gives me one timed work, I will perform that very effectively.So, If I were a boss of institutions, I will focus at first in the efficiency of a worker, and then arrange work-schedule.
To wrap it up, it is very difficult to provide a persuasive decision in this open ended question. Although some may oppose my purview, it is lucid to understand why man fails to yield result if case of overworks. That's why I do believe each and every logic clearly substantiates the main theme of the statement in the positive direction.
- **** Which option would you prefer when you have free time off school?1: taking part in part - time job or volunteering work 2: playing a musical instrument 73
- Formal education restrains our mind spirits rathan set them free 73
- Which option would you prefer when you have free time off school?1: taking part in part - time job or volunteering work 2: playing a musical instrument 73
- **** It is more important to keep old friends rather than to make new friends 73
- Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... to be deemed as an inefficient person. However it is not his fault, it is seen as the ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...h mixture of learning system spoils the students mentality to learn his predilection bas...
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Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...student has a space of brain upon which if he is reared, he will master it. Otherw...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Conversely,
...instance, my friend was weak in talent. Conversely he was adamant to learn agriculture stu...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...not take up all pressure into his mind. Finally his brain power was at a stake and he l...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: So
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Suggestion: That's
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Line 17, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he statement in the positive direction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i mean, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 87.0 52.1666666667 167% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2710.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 597.0 407.700716846 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53936348409 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94303383012 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64392400394 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 212.727598566 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514237855946 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 860.4 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1807367526 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6875 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.65625 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09375 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.093446963163 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0211138639342 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358239203392 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542406115787 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027369522395 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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