The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
During my life I have had a lot of trips travels with tour guide and without tour guides. My best trips were without a tour guide, consequently, I do not support the statement. and I think that people can enjoy their traveling with their friends or family members, even alone, but not with a tour guide. To support my view I have my explanations and examples which are introduced below.
First of all, when people led by a tour guide they cannot enjoy the time as they wish. For example, once I was in George where I visited history museum. There was a tour guide who introduced the detailes of the history, which so long that seemed boring. But, as I was the member of the tour group I could not leave them. It turns, that tour guides set limitation of the trip. iIn general. However,, travelers just want to enjoy the time instead of standartd excursions.
Secondly, I believe that the important part of traveling is adventure. It is well know, that tour guides are familiar with the are in which they work. In this case they just try to make safe for tour group members. Actually, the process is logical, but uninteresting for the members. For instance, once I was in Egypt with my friends and we knew that the bedouins are living near our hotel. We decided to visit them and to see their exotice lifestyle. Though. wWe realaized that it would be daengeorous for us, but anyway we visited them. Fortunately, we had very funny time, because the bedouins were very kind people and, even, they let us to take picture with them. Before, the local tour organisers had said that never visit bedouins as they can damage us and even kill.
Finally, the tour guides charge money for their service which is just additional costs for sure. In fact, instead of wasting money to hire a tour guide, travelers can spend money in an effective way. For example, one of my friends recently has been on holiday in abroaud. The travel company required huge amount of money for the tour guide. But my friend refused of that service and could organise his trip by himself. As a result he spent the money buying presents for his friends and relatives.
To sum up, I state that the trip with a tour guide has many disadvantages, in particular they set some limits for travelers and require extra costs. According to my own experieance it is better to enjoy a trip without a tour guide than with.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57342657343 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40286431881 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501165501166 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6868901685 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.6666666667 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.48148148148 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271178840557 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722837806062 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758167126142 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150060760593 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518694277949 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.