book aren't need any more

Essay topics:

book aren't need any more

These days, with thriving in technology and enhancing in the amount of information, the world has been encountered with altering in the way of saving knowledge and information. In the past, books used to be the most important element to save data and information especially in educational aspect and by books the people be able to obtain another countries' information. Even though, there are some people that use printing books yet, but in my opinion these book are not require any longer. Due to the fact that the volume of knowledge and speed of increase of them, the book isn’t anymore a convenient and suitable element in order to save information and use by people because of some reasons.
First of all, the book get more space and it is hard to carry anywhere, oppositely, electronic books that recently replace with printing books are more available and easier to use. We can save a lot E-books in our electronic devices like mobile, laptop and so on, hence we always can get access to any book that we want. The people didn’t need any more to go to the library or book story to get their required books. By development of E-book, they can buy them online or in some cases they can download books free on internet. It is the most important reason that most people have gotten rid of using printing books inasmuch as that recently most previous books have been supersede by E-books.
Secondly, preparing of printing books, because of the materials and labor, get more money in comparison to E-book. But in other hand, the electronic books can prepare once time and after that get copy of them without any significant cost. Obviously, for people always go toward cheaper choices, recently they have turn toward E-books more than printing book.
Third, printing books can't be neat and intact because with using books a lot and touching their cover and papers, they will be spoiled overtime. In the opposite, E-book will be always clean and intact, that can be used for years. Accordingly, people can buy E-book once time and use it over years. So that, not only cost of having books will be decreased, also it is possible for people to look into their book without any worry about damaging them. For example, when I used to read book in printing one, I always didn’t be relax in read them because I always must had been care about damaging of them. But by using of E-book, I have not stress in this way, and read book more than past.
All in all, recently E-book books are supplanted as substitute of printing book. in fact the printing book aren’t convenient and useful in comparison to E-book, because of their volume. And also, the E-book will be cost cheaper than printing books, so by seeing these, people don’t attend to the printing book any more, and use E-book instead.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essay Categories
Independent TOEFL Writing

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ks the people be able to obtain another countries information. Even though, there are som...
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Line 1, column 471, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...t, but in my opinion these book are not require any longer. Due to the fact that the vo...
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Line 2, column 677, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'superseded'.
Suggestion: superseded
... recently most previous books have been supersede by E-books. Secondly, preparing of pri...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'turned'.
Suggestion: turned
...ard cheaper choices, recently they have turn toward E-books more than printing book....
^^^^
Line 4, column 23, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n printing book. Third, printing books cant be neat and intact because with using b...
^^^^
Line 4, column 643, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'stressed'.
Suggestion: stressed
...hem. But by using of E-book, I have not stress in this way, and read book more than pa...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...planted as substitute of printing book. in fact the printing book aren't conv...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, for example, in fact, first of all, in my opinion, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2325.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74489795918 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45024202155 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440816326531 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.0 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5543171921 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.714285714 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385790846908 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14938277471 0.076458572812 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091719803393 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259337620621 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883496864126 0.0645574589148 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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