Cars are paramount type of transportation. they are one of necessary things in live. whether cars in twenty years become fewer that today, every one has a different view point. Some believe, in the following decades there are fewer cars, other have different perspective. To me I do not concur with previous statement. In the following years car number will be increase. I feel this way due to a couple reasons, I will explore them in the following essay.
First of all, increase of population is one of the stronge reason which explain why number of car will increase. elevation in number of people in the following decade lead to increase of using cars. This is mainly because, every one in this world need cars to go to their work, or school. there is a direct propotion between number of cars and population, mean result in increasing in using cars. this is a comppeling example from my real live, before ten years ago dad has car. Today, when we are grow up, everyone has car, today we have four car instead of one. and so one. from that example we can figure out how expansion in population result in elevation in cars number.
Second, increase in competition between factories which produse cars contribute to attract people to burchase cars. many companies try to increase quality of their cars by adding many accessaries like movible will motivate people to buy new cars. For instance BMW company introduce new cars every years. As wee all know that many people intrested with new brands of cars. therefore increase in competition cause increase purchase ofcars.
In conclusion, the statement is not as persuasive as it stands, this is mainly because , in the following decade the population increase . moreover competition between companies also increase , all these reson result in highly increase using cars.
Cars are paramount type of transportation. they are one of necessary things in live. whether cars in twenty years become fewer that today, every one has a different view point. Some believe, in the following decades there are fewer cars, other have different perspective. To me I do not concur with previous statement. In the following years car number will be increase. I feel this way due to a couple reasons, I will explore them in the following essay.
First of all, increase of population is one of the stronge reason which explain why number of car will increase. elevation in number of people in the following decade lead to increase of using cars. This is mainly because, every one in this world need cars to go to their work, or school. there is a direct propotion between number of cars and population, mean result in increasing in using cars. this is a comppeling example from my real live, before ten years ago dad has car. Today, when we are grow up, everyone has car, today we have four car instead of one. and so one. from that example we can figure out how expansion in population result in elevation in cars number.
Second, increase incompetitiom between facteries which produse cars contribute to attract people to burchase cars. many companies try to increase quality of their cars by adding many accessaries like moveble will motivate people to buy new cars. For instance BMW company introduce new cars every years. As wee all know that many people intrested with new brands of cars. therefore increase in competition cause increase purchase ofcars.
In conclusion, the statement is not as persusive as it stands, this is mainly because , in the following decade the population increase . moreover competition between companies also increase , all these reson result in highly increase using cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92508143322 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63092945597 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547231270358 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8847497739 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7272727273 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9545454545 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398053446393 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133915230054 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145956006687 0.0737576698707 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250848717767 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.234065304679 0.0645574589148 363% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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