Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote.
The rights of every human are diminished when they rights of one human are threatened. Young people need to vote, they need to get out there and every vote must count. Some people says that children above 15 should not vote because they are emotionally not secure, not well educated after all, not aware of whom they are voting. I disagree with the point by saying that, to diminish inequality, get aware of more about politics, and they are enough smart to vote.
First, it is inequality and against human rights just because someone is a part of a certain age group, not allowing young children to vote will be against the human rights. I believe that young children above age 15 should vote to choose their next president or leader, after all, it will affect their future so why should they not decide. For example, when a young has to vote then every candidate will make a clear policy to benefit young children about their education and school payments so as a result, it will change education system for better future of students.
I also believe that, the ability to vote would give kids more political education. In other words, in schools teachers will teach them about candidate policies and clarify which candidate have better plans for the country and their community and most important for education system of the country, eventually students will engage and learn more about politics.
Additionally, 18 does not automatically mean smart and responsible. Many matures even cannot read and write, not aware of whom they are voting, not conscious of their favorite candidate plans. Meanwhile, most of young children are well educated, have more knowledge of politics and they are really smart than some of adults. For instance, Michael Kearney who graduated from high school at six and got his bachelor's degree at age 10 is more smart wise to current situations of the country, politics than a mature man who is not educated. For this reason, the statement is true about young children above age 15 should vote.
To put in brief, Young generation is more educated and more conscious, personally I in my point of view, children above age 15 should vote, they should have franchise to choose whom will be the next leader which will affect their life and future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'right'
Suggestion: right
...of every human are diminished when they rights of one human are threatened. Young peop...
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Line 7, column 310, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the adults') or simply say ''some adults''.
Suggestion: some of the adults; some adults
...politics and they are really smart than some of adults. For instance, Michael Kearney who grad...
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Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill be the next leader which will affect their life and future.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'after all', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in brief', 'as a result', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203233256351 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.161662817552 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.094688221709 0.0866891130778 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.066974595843 0.046263068375 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0577367205543 0.0685040099705 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120092378753 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0207852193995 0.0351676179071 59% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37580534116 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277136258661 0.0309702414327 89% => OK
Particles: 0.00230946882217 0.00188951952338 122% => OK
Determiners: 0.0531177829099 0.0887237588012 60% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0392609699769 0.0209618222197 187% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0230946882217 0.0139019557991 166% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2282.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 390.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85128205128 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325641025641 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223076923077 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153846153846 0.174417080927 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0974358974359 0.112833075102 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37580534116 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484615384615 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.0632192031 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5533526081 127% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7875159442 48.84282405 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.133333333 120.699889404 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.5533526081 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 48.3076923077 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.20161290323 1.45489161554 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349160714243 0.300154397459 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133434426048 0.103427244359 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.05592243811 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.57283045608 0.497263757937 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183137468408 0.151897553556 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152201989713 0.114077575197 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852459975293 0.0781384742642 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.277120166475 0.336927656856 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0279724350018 0.067059652881 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240420514594 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723891947151 0.0618886996521 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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