A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position
The construction of a factory near a residential zone is a controversial issue in modern society. Although this future project may face some disadvantages like pollution and traffic jam, it also brig many advantages, like new jobs and prosperity. I strongly support this event because I think the advantages overweight the disadvantages. I feel this way for two reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, the community where I live desperately needs the jobs that this factory will create. My locality is small and far away from the big city. The criminality rates, although low, still persist. In addition, we still face unemployment and poverty and the demand of public transportation can't satisfy the larger population that lives in the area. For example, with the construction of this new factory, more jobs will be available because the necessity of more workers. Furthermore, the business in the area will be more prosper because the new army of workers will need clothes, shoes and lunches, also gas for their trucks. That is, the poverty and the unemployment will decrease and people will be happier. The new construction's project will give more and better services to the community, such as ease the traffic concerns and give a fresh and renovated red of transportation, able to comply with the demand.
Secondly, the idea of having a factory near my home town is not as bad as many people think. Although the new project may cause more noise and pollution, new factories have all the necessary equipment to make a proper dispose of residues. Moreover, these new developments comply with the city regulations because they take care of proper sewage treatment. So, proper care of the environment is priority for developers, whose works is not only the design but also control the proper functioning of the industry. On the other hand, with the taxes paid by this new project, the budget of the community will increase tremendously and the services provide to residents will be more and better. For example, more houses, schools and shopping places will be built and the red of transportation will improve.
In conclusion, I strongly support the construction of the new factory. I think this can be a great addition to my neighborhood because more jobs will be creating and the pollution and noise that it might generate it won't be as bad as it may sound.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, as for, for example, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99750623441 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95211081098 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501246882793 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8811147243 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.2 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.05 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113079688563 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410211609458 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350035553192 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819294321958 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395523220586 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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