Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Keeping old friends and making new ones at the same time can be tough but not impossible. I believe in the happiness of meeting and old friend after a long time and feeling that nothing has changed. In the other hand I believe in the magic of having a new friend. This action can be gratifying. It is good to have and keep both friends, old and news. Having both is rewarming and necessary for me. I do not agree with the statement above for these three mainly reasons.
First of all, having a friend is like having family. A true friendship can last forever. I remember when I came to this beautiful country 10 years ago. It was hard to leave my hometown and my love ones behind. Harder was to arrive alone and confuse to a new land. Fortunately, my old friend from elementary was there, waiting for me. She helped me to accommodate. She was candid and nice, like in old times. I wouldn’t expect less from her. She mitigated my pain in a lot of ways. Nothing had changed, and this is something I would never forget.
Secondly, having a new friend mean a fresh start. A new friend can introduce new people and experiences into your life. Can give you advice, assistance without knowing you well. I remember my first job. I feared new people. But I met a new friend who helped me to ease the first day. He was delicate and patient. I accomplished my job without difficulties. At the end of the day we went out together to know each other better. It was amazing to have him because this was the beginning of a true friendship and later a story of love. Today we have a family together.
Finally, I truly belief we need both new and old friends in our lives to keep things interesting and balanced. New friends are necessary to spice our live while old friends are our constants and the ones who will support us through good and bad times. We must balance the fine art of maintaining new friends, as well as old friends.
To conclude, I believe keeping old friends while making new ones could be good for your mental and spiritual health. Having both in your life is joyful and can make a difference.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s hard to leave my hometown and my love ones behind. Harder was to arrive alone and ...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...iculties. At the end of the day we went out together to know each other better. It ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42820512821 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47763036034 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515384615385 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2845923798 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.7941176471 100.406767564 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4705882353 20.6045352989 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.67647058824 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239035983685 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055872619395 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610438669744 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154134875275 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644985395416 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 11.7677419355 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.23 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.