Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples
Travel in your own country can be a wonderful experience. With the boom of the economy traveling has become more and more affordable. The interaction with your culture you and the possibility to make friends close home are some of the advantages to consider. Traveling your own nation is more beneficial that going outside your land. I agree with this statement because if money and safety are your priorities, then domestic travel can mitigate the inconvenience of long flights, a potential language barrier and any financial difficulty you might encounter in your trip.
First of all, one of the advantages you can have is getting to know your history and your heritage more in deep. Although is it interesting to look at other cultures, get to know your culture first is more important. Additionally, you can enrich your cultural background and expand your horizons. I remember the first time I visited New York. I had. My family and I traveled with the companion of a guide to every landmark. We also stayed at a cousin’s house, so we were able to visit her and save money. In contrast, if you decide to travel abroad you must spend money buying airplane tickets and reserving the cheapest hotels if you want to save. This could be very inconvenient.
Secondly, visiting your country have more advantages. For example, no need to worry about the language barrier since it is your own language Although learning other languages can be fun and challenge at the same time, traveling domestically is more convenient because you can communicate without hesitation during your trip. Additionally, you can meet new friends, enjoy a movie, visit museums, parks. I have a colleague at work who went to China a couple of years ago. He was so stressed and afraid of the new language that decided to take an entry level course before engaging in his trip. As a result, he had to spend extra money buying new clothes because his trip was during winter time, using all his savings. Economy is another aspect to consider before travel.
Finally, if you have a busy schedule, you can fit your trip by combining long weekends and holidays. Very convenient when you have family and friends to visit. For example, last year during thanksgiving weekend I was able to combine my vacation days with the holiday. We ended it up with almost a week free, which was very convenient. Moreover, when traveling in your own country there is no need of extra vaccinations comparing when you must travel abroad. These simple things are easy to accomplish when you make plans accordingly and can make your destination easy and more enjoyable, which might inspire you to make future trips. This is another advantage versus traveling outside.
To conclude, I firmly agree that traveling in your own country instead visiting a foreign destination is better. People can benefit from this because it is safe, affordable and brings the opportunity to stay in touch with family and friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...sibility to make friends close home are some of the advantages to consider. Traveling your ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, finally, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2464.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 502.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90836653386 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68526783074 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503984063745 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 785.7 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.9695269116 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9655172414 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3103448276 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.62068965517 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310493996729 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899421548653 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789383433137 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208989524422 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703973052615 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.