For the sophisticated work of employees, companies choose various statistics. While some company buys new advanced technology for helping workers, some improve their working environment to be more comfortable. It is so controvertible for companies to make absolute decisions. In my view, their productivity will be enhanced by the rehabilitated working environment for workers. They can profoundly communicate with their colleagues, ease the stress of their working tasks, and acquire brushed motivation for their work.
To begin with, remaking working places makes plentitude of opportunities to talk with their fellows. Communication with each employee is most significant for high production in the company. On the other hand, the design of working desks does not fit in the working style to communicate with each other in workers. Therefore, it is not enough for them to plan other tasks or ask for advice between them. Hence, the surplus will be gradually getting better by easily communicative places.
Secondly, workers obtained their stress ease their feeling by innovated their working places. Some people hold deep stress to think about the contents including their company. It connects with low working products because employees sometimes quite from their works and are late to go to their companies by their stress. Nevertheless, once the company decides to reconstruct the building, the feeling of workers will be refreshed, like first-year workers. As a result, the working quality will be distinctly boosted.
Finally, companies can keep the incentive of workers culminated by recreated their working places. It is certainly difficult for people to continue highly motivation in companies. Generally speaking, there are reasons such as uncomfortable chairs for each desk, unfitted color orders on the walls, and old fashioned furniture for their motivation. When a company solves each concern by their workers, workers will work frantically for vastly productions.
To sum with, the company should make the solution for its production more by rehabilitated buildings than new technology. I surely believe that they definitely purse for their high productions by communicable places, comforted their feelings, further motivations.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Some students have poor study habits when they enter university or college All students should take required courses to develop good habits 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The most important characteristic of a successful politician or leader is good communication skills 65
- Nowadays children rely too much on the technology like computers smart phone video games for fun and entertainment Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children s development 60
- In order to improve your presentation skill which of the following method do you think is more effective To watch video recording of the speech To practice with classmates or colleagues 42
- Do you agree or disagree Because many problems can now be solved by people themselves and their family help from government is no longer necessary 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61807580175 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99854191972 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562682215743 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3139189187 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.7619047619 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198402633837 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735268459249 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602177662169 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120043710326 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546606190764 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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