With the emerging technology and the new 21st century, people have had many life easier making concepts and devices. One such technology which has blown market with it is mobile cellphone. Gone are the days when people used to rush to their neighbors for attending call because initial invention was landline phone and later another version of cellphone took over the market. Life seemed much easier than compared to the previous century wherein telegrams used to cost much for sending messages.
Much alike chemistry where every equation has formation of byproducts, which are not useful for the scientist. Every technology and intelligent system has disadvantages also known as cons. Pros consist of the availability of remote signals which enable user to go mobile in the scenario of receiving or sending a call across the sea whereas during old time it required a special care department which would fix the cable in order to enable a call. Cons i.e. disadvantages consist of the plantation of multiple remote signal towers to enable a call. Implantation of towers has a high magnitude of signal strength that it causes neuro problems not only to humans but also poise a threat to the bird species.
After looking at the scenario above, it is evident that cellphone usage comes at the cost of sacrifice of health for all living being and hence the usage must be minimal.
- Our life is much easier than our parents life agree or disagree 60
- Compare and contrast the advantages and disadvantages of using a cellphone Give illustrations and reasons to support your opinion 60
- playing sports teaches people more important lessons about life 60
- Our life is much easier than our parents life agree or disagree 60
- Our life is much easier than our parents life agree or disagree 60
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...d the new 21st century, people have had many life easier making concepts and devices...
^^^^
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...arket with it is mobile cellphone. Gone are the days when people used to rush to th...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, whereas, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 231.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97835497835 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55185901023 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632034632035 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 618.680645161 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1351087558 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0796166233813 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031290393522 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278959509392 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474055993879 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172727041024 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...d the new 21st century, people have had many life easier making concepts and devices...
^^^^
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...arket with it is mobile cellphone. Gone are the days when people used to rush to th...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, whereas, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 231.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97835497835 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55185901023 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632034632035 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 618.680645161 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1351087558 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0796166233813 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031290393522 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278959509392 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474055993879 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172727041024 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.