In hustle and bubble of populated city lies a peaceful bond of human with their pets. Pets or other animals have a strong sense, and they are able to sense humans strongly. People say a relation once formed last for years but does this bond gets exercised itself or it takes pain or efforts to build it stronger is yet to be looked upon. The reason of such a wonderful relation is listed below.
Firstly, when animals get disheartened or are in pain, they need support from human. They like to be caressed by their caretaker and once this caretaking gets exercised then start considering their caretaker as parents and return ample amount of love in return. They become part of their life to an extent that their early morning cuddles becomes happiest part of the day.
Secondly, this kind of relationship has zero expectation because of the simplicity that it carries, and bond is so strong that no one can intrude their world or attack them. This relationship gets stronger day by day and starts protecting each other.
Hence, this type of relation is treated as a family member and does not harm unless provoked.
- Compare and contrast the advantages and disadvantages of using a cellphone Give illustrations and reasons to support your opinion 3
- Our life is much easier than our parents life agree or disagree 60
- Our life is much easier than our parents life agree or disagree 60
- Compare and contrast the advantages and disadvantages of using a cellphone Give illustrations and reasons to support your opinion 60
- Many people have a close relationship with their pets These people treat their birds cats or other animals as member of their family In your opinion are such relationships good Why or Why not Use specific reasons and details to support your answer 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...strong sense, and they are able to sense humans strongly. People say a relation o...
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Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'get'?
Suggestion: get
...ormed last for years but does this bond gets exercised itself or it takes pain or ef...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'becomes the happiest'.
Suggestion: becomes the happiest
...extent that their early morning cuddles becomes happiest part of the day. Secondly, this kind...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 196.0 407.700716846 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73979591837 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41249933911 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647959183673 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 618.680645161 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6418059167 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208463828645 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076917038408 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230090177065 0.0737576698707 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113033631474 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250445927874 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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