Compare and contrast the advantages and disadvantages of using a cell
phone. Give illustrations and reasons to support your opinion.
In my estimation, cell phone has multitude advantage and disadvantage
First of all, cell phone is made the universe small town. For instance, now people are able to contact each other for hours very easy which neglecting long distance between countries, also they make voice and video call. In fact, It is great comminuction.
Next, nowadays cell phone has an educational role. For example, it includes several application in all fields such as Students can downloads dictionaries application to learn English, doctors can set up application full of information about disease, companies use some of it to announce about job opportunity. In fact, it is very wonderful.
In contrast, cell phone may be un useful it can share in Wasting time, discontinuing real visiting between relatives, also transmits dangerous radiations for all people specially childerns which can lead to occur mutations in their body genes. Unfortantely, we can't stop risk of these cell phone.
In sum, rather! cell phone has pros and cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, so, for example, for instance, in contrast, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 43.0788530466 23% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 1977.66487455 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 163.0 407.700716846 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32515337423 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90305296399 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 212.727598566 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705521472393 0.524837075471 134% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 618.680645161 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.980617971 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4444444444 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0517611857649 0.236089414692 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0164059185915 0.076458572812 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258893917775 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0380815105354 0.150856017488 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046250543838 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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