Discuss the advantages of living in a large city versus living in a small town.
The place one lives can affect their mentality and perspective. When deciding for a place to live people are often confused between living in a large city and living in a small town. Both has its own advantages and disadvantages which I will explore in the following essay.
Living in a large city can be entertaining and wholesome for some but all might not feel the same. Large cities have a lot of opportunities and this is one prime reason why many people flock from small towns to large cities. A large city can open up many job opportunities but at the same time it may not be easier to get a job in a city due to the high competition. The cost of living is higher in large cities and it can be hard for people with minimum wages to survive in a large city. Cities are usually found to be more polluted than small towns. Living in a city can make commuting to places easier due to their efficient communication systems. Life in a city can provide us with a lot of material things but it may miss out on a lot of other things. People living in large cities are usually found to be more stressed and worried than people living in the outskirts.
Small towns mostly offer a more peaceful and communal lifestyle though this may not be necessarily true. The downsides of living in a small town is that it may not have all the latest facilities and may not have much opportunities. A small town may not be a good place to start a business. The economy and purchasing power of the city is always at a higher side when compared to smaller towns. The towns may lack a lot of public facilities and energetic lifestyle that the cities have to offer, but people in villages and small towns are found to be happier than people in the cities. It is reported that life at small towns can offer more work life balance.
Cities can be more culturally vibrant and diverse than a small town. One reason for it be diverse is due to the large number of jobs and better economy it has to offer. Small towns too have their positives. They tend to less crowded and more peaceful. The quality of life in terms of happiness will always be high at small towns but in terms of infrastructure and facilities the city stands tall. In my opinion, both places have their positives and negatives and thus it is on the individual to decide where to live. People should choose their place of living according to their ambitions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 213, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... the latest facilities and may not have much opportunities. A small town may not be ...
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Message: Did you mean 'to have'?
Suggestion: to have
...er economy it has to offer. Small towns too have their positives. They tend to less crow...
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Line 13, column 592, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of living according to their ambitions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43370786517 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46572873706 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.397752808989 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6606314859 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2083333333 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5416666667 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.45110844103 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415376477943 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139677657102 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989699020054 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309822471476 0.150856017488 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800777040075 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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