Some young children spend a grest amount of time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons nad examples to support your answer.
Nowadays young adults are more inclined towards the sports so they engange most of the time in practicing. In the given scenario, it is perceived that whether investing a lot of their time in playing games is good or bad. Meanwhile I am of the opinion that undoubtedly playing games has a positive impact on youngsters however there are few downside of it. I feel this way for several reason which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To start with, physical activity makes people healthy and energetic. In this digital world, most of the children spend their time indulging on phone, laptop and so on. To be more precise, if adult manage to involve in sports then this will definetely makes them active and fit. I have witnessed this in my own personal life. My brother, he always get busy either doing some exercise or playing football in footsal. Indeed, this habit of him has benefited in many ways. Similarly, he has become more enthusiastic and healthy too.
Secondly, sports has proven to be one of the bestest carrer of this mordern era. Similary, nowadays young people who are keen on playing games can convert their passion into the career. Besides, many adults who are expending their entire time on sports to be more perfect can gain more knowledge in advance level and consequently excell in it. To cite an example, Sandip Lamichhane, who has thrive his career in the sport field is an inpiration for many young adults out there. Therefore, practicing games provide aid to select their future in sports.
The above mentioned statements may sound convincing nevertheless there are negatives as well which should not be taken for granted. To be more clear, spending a lot more time in games only can be detrimental for their study. Despite the fact that adult can choose their aim in sports, along with this their education also plays a vital role in it. Hence, adult should know how to balance their study as well continuing their passion. Distraction should not obstruct their study,
As we can see, being active in games is fruitful for adults nonetheless, they should not be at the expense of their study. Thus, if the career and the study could be carried together then it would be great.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...r time in playing games is good or bad. Meanwhile I am of the opinion that undoubtedly pl...
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Line 1, column 338, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun downside seems to be countable; consider using: 'few downsides'.
Suggestion: few downsides
... impact on youngsters however there are few downside of it. I feel this way for several reas...
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Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'downsides'?
Suggestion: downsides
...act on youngsters however there are few downside of it. I feel this way for several reas...
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Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...few downside of it. I feel this way for several reason which I will explore in the subsequent ...
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Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...wn personal life. My brother, he always get busy either doing some exercise or play...
^^^
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'thrived', 'thriven'.
Suggestion: thrived; thriven
... an example, Sandip Lamichhane, who has thrive his career in the sport field is an inp...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, i feel, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79634464752 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47165692084 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558746736292 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4595700138 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4090909091 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77272727273 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114388611636 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03849698497 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358993553769 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682683418817 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446576005874 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...r time in playing games is good or bad. Meanwhile I am of the opinion that undoubtedly pl...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 338, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun downside seems to be countable; consider using: 'few downsides'.
Suggestion: few downsides
... impact on youngsters however there are few downside of it. I feel this way for several reas...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'downsides'?
Suggestion: downsides
...act on youngsters however there are few downside of it. I feel this way for several reas...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...few downside of it. I feel this way for several reason which I will explore in the subsequent ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...wn personal life. My brother, he always get busy either doing some exercise or play...
^^^
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'thrived', 'thriven'.
Suggestion: thrived; thriven
... an example, Sandip Lamichhane, who has thrive his career in the sport field is an inp...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, i feel, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79634464752 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47165692084 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558746736292 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4595700138 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4090909091 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77272727273 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114388611636 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03849698497 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358993553769 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682683418817 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446576005874 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.