Era of twenty-first century is the time of highly talented, highly skilled people and more knowledgeable people. People of today are more aware of pros and cons of society in terms of social, academics and professional study. Hence, parents and family are more understanding and more focused towards the benefits of their young generations. It is comparatively much easier today than that in the past to achieve success with help from one's family. On account of several valuable reasons in support of idea, few are the ones' mentioned below.
First and foremost, the understanding between family and the young generation is much compassionate than it was in the past. Today, people believe in developing friendly relations with their kids in order to know and understand their desires, passion and goals. For instance, people spend time with their family by taking them to a family holiday or a trip where they spend time together and develop a good bond of understanding. The corporates even have two days off for every weekend for all their employees. In turn young ones develop trust with their family and share things easily with their family, which is often supportive and provide good guidance. However, people in the past spend much time working as a lobor without machines and this busy schedule made them weiry enough to spend less time to understand family needs and desires.
Second point for consideration is, people today are highly educated and possess knowledge about almost every field,. It often helps them in guiding well their young generations. For instance, if a mother is well educated and supposedly is a doctor, she can advice her child well if the child wants to follow the same profession; And, even if being doctor is not the longing desire of child, mother due to her life experience can guide well for some other occupation as well. Unlike, past days when the number of educated were quite less due to which kids often had to face problems in deciding of a good career.
To sum up the entire supported reasons, I will recapitulate that it is very much easy to achieve success when family is supportive like today and unlike old days. With help from family one can pursue dreams and goals they long for and live a better life in this competing edge of highly talented people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, so, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88295165394 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53295842456 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531806615776 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6079988754 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.882352941 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149838410075 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05846561086 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074234014699 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108679323353 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679053587869 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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