Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important than the ability to make many new friends easily.
In our sophisticated world, the human relationships are extremely complicated. Some people prefer to make a large number of friends easily. However, I think it is more essential to keep our friendship with a few friends over a long time instead of having too much of them. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into two conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.
To begin with, the faster we make a friend, the faster we are prone to lose it. The relationships among people that are formed quickly is totally vulnerable. Since it doesn't have a stong basis and it is not usually based on deep familiarity and bond between people. As a result, it is likely to disappear after a while. My own experience is a compelling example demonstrating this fact. When I was an undergraduate specialized in mathematics, I lived in dormitory and shared my room with a history student there. We build our friendship immediately and seemed close friends for four years. Nontheless, we didn't spend much time to know more about each other. After we finished our studies, we left the dormitory and didn't see each other anymore. We didn't have deep affections for each other and get separated easily.
Another equally significant point is that the long term friends are more reliable. We know each other for a long time. Therefore, we are strongly dependent on each other and there is an emotional bond berween us that makes them take care of us in various situations such as unexpected emergencies that happen in life. For instance, last year I went bankrupt after struggling with innumerable financial problems. I losed all my saved money and even had to sell my house. My childhood best friend assisted me with those difficulties and helped me to rent a new house. Had I not had this thoughtful and kind friend since my childhood, I would stay in trouble.
To make a long story short. I firmly believe that a few number of long-lasting friendships are more important than the ablility to make new friends easily. That's because these friendships are not only more sustainable and stable but also more fruitful and helpful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98622589532 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85332963953 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567493112948 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8490544667 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4166666667 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.125 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243733896473 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068726658958 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762085762267 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177437389694 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758491893159 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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