Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Human beings are group species, almost everyone cannot endure being alone for an entire life. That is to say, making friends is currently an important ability for us. In addition, this ability can be separated into two aspect, one is keeping not so many friends but longer, the other is making new friends easily. In my opinion, it is undeniably that having less but longer friends can bring us more happiness.
To begin with, having a friend for a long period of time indicates that he would know you better and deeper. It goes without saying that stronger friendship gets us access to larger pleasure. For me, I have a friend, who I met in elementary school, is still my first choice to hang out with. As it makes me feel more comfortable to get along with a friend that we understand mutually and well.
In addition, it is the deeper friendship that can accompany us and go overcome any unsettled predicament. As we know each other's habit and weakness, it is easier for us to provide with increasingly helpful advice, which is nearly impossible in the case of new friends.
Finally, it is indisputable that the ability to making new friends easier is an essential skill in one's career. However, career is just a part of our life and there are plenty of more vital things right there. Our family, our hobbies, our past, and our deep feelings, instead of friends, these are what could be connected to our long and old friends, even if there might be few.
To summarize, close and long friends one of the most vital source of the happiness, because they are strongly connected to our life. They can accompany us, help us, and support us, which plays an indispensable role in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'aspect' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'aspects'.
Suggestion: aspects
... this ability can be separated into two aspect, one is keeping not so many friends but...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... begin with, having a friend for a long period of time indicates that he would know you better...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... unsettled predicament. As we know each others habit and weakness, it is easier for us...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...friends easier is an essential skill in ones career. However, career is just a part ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, so, still, well, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66333333333 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49652870113 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3263405689 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.2666666667 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210208943945 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809419972998 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677559866055 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111951553548 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698648694385 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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