Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The human always needs have freinds or companior in his life due to fear and pain exist in the aloneness. The questione here is whether a human, in order to have good relations in his whole life, sould preserve his old relations or improve his ability to find new friends? There may seem to be controversy at first glance; Howeve, I significantly concur that a person should always have the ability of finding new freinds. I have some compelling reasons for my opinion which are mentioned in the following paragraphs.
First and most importance is that, the relathionship is a tow-direction procces. It means that sometimes one member of relation don't want to continue the friendship due to personal reasons. Although, another one exerts all the efforts need to maintain the relation. So a person not to rely on some relation and think that these relations will stable foreever. Many of people can observe that complain from their freinds who leave them. But, personally I think human not see a relation is exist forever and expect their friend always behave to them constantly. IN this way, they can enjoy their relations more so on, they live in the moment more.
Second reason I should mention that is, in some condition the life create a distance between two friends. They can try to conserve their relation but afte a while, inconscies the relation be more dull. I can illustrate the subject by an example of my personal life. I had a friend which I spend all my times with him. After a while when he migrated to Canada for continue his education, our friendship get less color than the past. Although, at first we tried to ask eachother moods, indeed, try to uphold our relations but after 2 years our rela
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58108289074 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1987508619 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.4705882353 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76470588235 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120358669668 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381413252134 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333823491644 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782470154242 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111408705338 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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