•Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All children should be required to take a foreign language class from the time they start school until they begin university. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
•Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All children should be required to take a foreign language class from the time they start school until they begin university. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Persistent deliberation is happening as to whether all juveniles must learn foreign language when they start to attend the first school till before they attend the university. A majority of populations insist that children should learn foreign language when they first start school until they start to attend the university. Nevertheless, some others strongly deride the above position. As far I am concerned, I am in favor of the latter opinion because forcing students to learn foreign language when they first start school until the date they begin to go university discourages them to learn and also it is time consuming for children.
To begin with, the primary argument for this is that it can dissuade students from learning. To be more specific, since children are young and they are likely to be force to learn certain subjects by adults. Then, they are not able to learn subjects that they enjoy to learn in their ages. Therefore, students are not likely to concentrate on the things that they are not interested. Further, it will discourage them to learn and they will have bad outcome on academic performance since the subjects are uninteresting. For example, I learned chinese for over ten years but, I am not able to communicate with chinese people. The reason that I am not able to communicate with the local people is because I was not interested in learning chinese so I didn't study hard at all. Overall, having students to learn foreign language at the young age till the first stage of adult is not effective since they can be discouraged to study.
In addition to, an added contention for my predisposition is that it is time wasting for students to learn foreign language from the first stage of school until they begin to attend the university. To illustrate, students are already busy learning their native language and other subjects from the school. Therefore, students have to focus studying on other subjects and their native language so it is time consuming for them to learn foreign languages. For instance, According to the South Korea’s education system, 70 percent of students hardly get good grade on the korean subjects so most of the South Korea’s high school don't force students to learn other countries’s language. Thus, it is time consuming for students because they have to learn other subjects in school.
In conclusion, these are the reasons why I think that children don't have to take foreign language class from the beginning of the school to the time when they start to attend the university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2342.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01498929336 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69297639057 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408993576017 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 716.4 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5754174558 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.523809524 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2380952381 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442597880961 0.236089414692 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168172484521 0.076458572812 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154873825748 0.0737576698707 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.392984572469 0.150856017488 261% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.315084734848 0.0645574589148 488% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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