Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All children should be required to take a foreign language class from the time they start school until they began university. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
enerally speaking, it is very important for parents when rising their children to take good care of their education. At the same time, this is extremely important because it will totally define their character and personality, and will also prepare them for the future. It is widely said that the more knowledge a person has, the more prepare for life he or she is. If children are required to take a foreign class at the beginning of school life, I'm totally sure some parents would believe this is a great idea, while others would disagree. In my opinion, this requirement can be very positive for children for two important reasons.
First of all, children who know more than one language can expect big differences in their lives. It is said that the best time for children to learn a new language is during the commence of school, when they are little because they can learn new things while their brain is under fully development and this activity requires a tremendous amount of energy. A child with more knowledge is expected to make big decisions and differences, as long as she or he knows how to take advantage of that. For example, my niece came to this country several years ago, and because she was very young, she was able to learn english in Elementary school and French while in High school, and still speaking our language at home. She was always brilliant as a student and by the time she graduated, she earned a full scholarship at Boston University and is actually working for the European Academy as a professor consultant, where she has received several awards and recognitions. Her whole life has changed since then. As you can see, my niece wouldn't go so far if she wouldn't have had the opportunity to speak more than one language and became in the great person that she is today.
Secondly, knowing more than one language can provide great experiences when travelling abroad. Many people like to travel because they learn new cultures, make new friends and experience new emotions, personally and professionally. Whether they prefer to travel alone or with the companion of a family member or a friend, it is always an amazing journey because you can learn how other people live and think by speaking their same language. I remember when my niece traveled to Scotland and French for her first conference. She was in charge of the foreign student department and had to interview future students for her program. She was excited and nervous, her heart was pumping very hard, but she felt pretty confident because she knew both languages very well. She was able not only of recruit new students, but also received an offer to work as a professor consultant in the most prestigious university in Scotland. This experience changed my niece's life in so many ways; she earned international reputation and learn more about European culture.
To conclude, though some parents may oppose to the new requirement for school, learning a new language since very early at school can be decisive in a child's life. Not only will make big differences in their lives, but also provide great personal and professional experiences. Every school nationwide should include this requirement in the school program.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Enerally
enerally speaking, it is very important for pare...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 449, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... class at the beginning of school life, Im totally sure some parents would believe...
^^
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ldren to learn a new language is during the commence of school, when they are little because...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1030, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ed since then. As you can see, my niece wouldnt go so far if she wouldnt have had the o...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1055, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... see, my niece wouldnt go so far if she wouldnt have had the opportunity to speak more ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 766, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ause she knew both languages very well. She was able not only of recruit new studen...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, while, for example, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2677.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 549.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87613843352 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61345554138 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473588342441 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 844.2 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4814357658 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.391304348 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8695652174 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4347826087 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129572786986 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431881923183 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424203588988 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935931973032 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252275521166 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.