do you agree or disagree with the following statement? all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
there is no doubt that nowadays,each university has requirement for students to graduate. I personally believe that all university's studenet should be require to take history classes no matter what their field of study is. I think history courses plays a key role for future.I pinpoint my compelling reasons to vindicate my perspective.
the first noteworthy reason regarding the issue is that studying history courses play like a lantern in any field that you want to study. It can help you to delve the lack of knowledge in that courses. owing to this, in any research or paper first you should study history about that field. For instant when I was an architecture designer student my professor never allow me to design until I first studied history about that field I want to design.because he believes that the history's context is more important than the idea you want to design.
The second pivotal point that I want to delve into is that, some times we can learn from this history courses that how to behave to save time and energy when get in to troubles. for an example when I was student I got into a trouble how to design a community center for slums and my professor said me you should study about the history and the community about this sector or district first and know about the daily behaviour of them.
the recapitulate the discussion of the all points mentioned above, study history courses should be on the requirement to finish and graduate for student because they can learn from pas for future and they can delve the lack of knowledge in that field and some time they can find their interested in that filed. so It id not doubt history courses can be useful for now and future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, second, so, as for, i think, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67109634551 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51721591807 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501661129568 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.9324787443 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.818181818 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326047880051 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148474007962 0.076458572812 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130634630177 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218873327817 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117758351968 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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