Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large, it's established beyond doubt that history is the one of the important aspect of each society and their critical facet is inevitable. It is more noticeable that the history cources will solve the mejority meystey in every subject, due to in this course we have bulky information in the varaiety subject. Threfore, I firmly agree with this idea that the history cources should be required to talk in any courses without considering their field on account of meany reasons which three of them are as follows:
The first exquisites need to be mentioned is that importance of history cources in the puzzeled topics which have been occured in any courses. In the most of the courses the professor speak about cases are unknown for human but when they could search and analyze them in the hystorical book, meany clues help them in this context. For example, always this was very important about the construction and architechre of pyrimides in Egypt, how they could built these gient structure with poor equipments but when they analysis the details must of the details have been clear and were useful for architechral, scientists courses.
Furthermore, history cources in the biology and medicine demonstrated their critical roles. By way of example, during this time with developmental tools in biology and medicine but they need the information about all type of diseases, ways of cure or even the traditional drugs. The mejority of these data were directly affected in modern medicine, also, some of them are accompolishing today, called "traditional medicine" or " ABOALISINA medicine". Threfore, history cources will be important for scientifical courses.
Finally, it is very important to be considered that in the context of modern world with a lot of development technology have been constructed by studying of history cources and the experiences of them. For example in the most of the subject history help to the scientists to avoid fults and do any defects, so, history squerly conduct them and accelerate these development. WWhen we read the historycal book in the most subject such as politics, a lot of events have been done which are key role for politicial men and government. Always history learn and train mejority of human which are eagor to learn it.
To put in all in nutshell, history cources should be considered in the all fielded because the value and importance of history are not digouse for us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...e of pyrimides in Egypt, how they could built these gient structure with poor equipme...
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Line 7, column 356, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this development' or 'these developments'?
Suggestion: this development; these developments
...ory squerly conduct them and accelerate these development. WWhen we read the historycal book in t...
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Line 7, column 532, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...role for politicial men and government. Always history learn and train mejority of hum...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, such as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10148514851 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83702997767 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2159233266 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.214285714 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163542573796 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623244957825 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543436250016 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109731305837 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550429384508 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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