Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
it is widely known that history , which is assocaited with nation and races tightly, is a very important subject. Nowadays, nearly all high school and primary school tend to require every student to have history courses. Some people even assumes that history courses are neccssary for all university students. however, contrary to this idea, in my opinion, university students should be required to take history courses.
Firstly, many university students don't need advanced history knowledge. Actually, for most students, university is the place where they learned important skills and knowledge for their career, not the place where they know general knowledge, which means that most university history courses is advenced level as well as students prefer courses associated with their own major. In fact, students could get history knowledge needed for daily life from pre-undergarduate studies, and history knowledge often is useless for students major. For example, I am university student who majors in biology and find advanced history knowledge is really useless. my knowledge of history learned before is enough for my daily life, like talking with others about history events as well as knowing how to celebrate a holiday. For my academic life, since biology is updated very quickly, what I need to do is to refer the up-to-date biology papers or materials. even the history of biology could not help our research, since the research methods have changed a lot.
Moreover, history courses could take students lots of time and money. university needs money from students to support courses, so most university courses are expensive. additionally, university courses often hold high standards, which means that enrolled students must spend much time.
since university students are always busy with different academic tasks and annoyed by the high course prices, additionally history course should be a really stupid idea. Imagine there is a student who major in technology and is told that the university requires students to have history courses. The result is that the student has to face more workload and financial pressure, which will result in the student become angry and hate the history courses. so the student will not be willng to really participate in the history courses. In the end, the student learn nearly nothing from the course and just lose energy and money. it is a bad result.
In conclusion, history courses are vital courses which should be required in primary school and high school. however, it is really ridiculous to require it for university students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32038834951 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58290077106 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473300970874 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5390488528 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6363636364 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269679628886 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990783010632 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516541960523 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184680544098 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280383081586 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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