Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement for the quality of people’s lives have already taken place.
In the modern era, science and technology is progressing with exponential speed and have always been playing an important role in the people’s lives. With taking these advancements into account, some people possess the conviction that the most important enhancement associated with the quality of people’s lives have already happened. I am of the opinion that there are still some domains in which human beings have many issues that should be solved. In what follows, I will elaborate on my reasons.
First and foremost, nowadays, due to adverse economic climate, people have hectic working schedules and are supposed to work from dawn to dusk to be able to survive. It is Axiomatic that the more people deal with this situation, the more stress they experience, so they will find themselves drawn into depression and some others mental and physical problems. Therefore, they need some cures for their issues, but there are some illnesses for which there is no remedy yet. My father’s experience is a case in point. About two years ago, due to bankruptcy, he was forced to take out a loan from a private bank. Thus, he was required to work very hard to be capable of giving back the money. Most of the time, he felt stressed, and after few months he face some physical issues. Afterwards, he went to visit a doctor, and as his doctor mentioned, there was no treatment for his physical problem. Finally, my father passed away because of his sickness. This experience made it clear to me that although science and technology had progressed, there are some physical problems for which there is no remedy.
The second noteworthy reason to be mentioned is that despite the huge amount of progress of science and technology, environmental problems are biggest issues facing the world today. Due to the fact that humans are burning fossil fuels more than before to generate energy, we are confronting some difficulties such as air pollution, soil corrosion and so on. Governments have tried to find way out of these issues. Nevertheless, they have not been able to come up with solutions. In the research conducted in my country in 2020, the results revealed that the amount of pollution has tripled over the course of time, and about fifty percent of forests have been demolished. Besides, there is almost no clean soil in the world, which means humans will encounter huge difficulties to gain enough foods for all people in the world. had science and technology progressed enough, there would not have been such problems in the world.
All aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that science and technology has not progressed enough because not only are there many mental and physical problems which there is no cure for them, but also, environmental problems we are facing every day are escalating, and humans is not able to solve them. It is suggested that governments allot more budget to research and development to enable scientist to find answers to these issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 749, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
... felt stressed, and after few months he face some physical issues. Afterwards, he we...
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Line 3, column 827, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Had
...ough foods for all people in the world. had science and technology progressed enoug...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, thus, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2485.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 501.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96007984032 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66283474548 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510978043912 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 773.1 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9185085522 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.043478261 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7826086957 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5652173913 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169679551575 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482405957831 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520684148368 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112324332895 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646096543429 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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