Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvements in the quality of people’s lives have already taken place
The accomplishment for the most significant improvements in the people's life standard has become the topic of great controversy in recent years. There is a considerable body of opinion that although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvements in the quality of people’s lives have already taken place. This paper will elucidate the reasons why I am in favor of this opinion.
On one hand, life satisfaction and economic development are what I consider a crucial factor. It is noteworthy that the most significant improvements in the quality of people's lives are synonymous with the process of diminishing famines, uneducated students, or unemployed workers in the world. Thanks to this, people are likely to broadening their horizons and deepening their knowledge. Accordingly, they are capable of having a solid foundation of knowledge. With this in mind, they stand a golden chance to find and understand their problems precisely. Eventually, this probably gives rise to life satisfaction. More notably, while enhancing a process of diminishing famines, uneducated students, or unemployed workers in the world, boosting the reputation of the country is inevitable. In the event of this, there is a likelihood for the nation to affect foreign investments in a bid to earn more financial profits. On the ground of that, it is also conceivable to build vital infrastructure and put a stop to the government deficit. During this process, increasing the budget for some of the economic activities seems to be on the cards. Under those circumstances, it makes it feasible for them to bring about a dramatic change to the woeful state of the country's infrastructure. Given these points, an attempt to decrease the number of famines, uneducated students, or unemployed workers in the world greatly contributes to life satisfaction and economic development.
On the other hand, some people might express a different view that the most significant improvements in the quality of people’s lives haven't already taken place since there are some serious dilemmas still occur such as racial discrimination, global warming caused by deforestation, or environmental contamination, and the minority of famines, uneducated, and unemployed in some of the impoverished countries in the worlds. As a consequence, it creates a huge burden on life satisfaction and economic development. Although that might be true, it is just applicable to a minority. People have already well thought about the plan to solve aforesaid problems. Incidentally, there is the apparent purposefulness of their efforts. Therefore, it is unlikely that improvements in the quality of people’s lives haven't already taken place. Another point often overlooked is that even if the advancement in the quality of people's lives hasn't taken place, it should be considered as the chance for people to create social connections and led to even more discussions to enhance the quality of their life. By the same token, they have an incentive to endeavor to develop a real sense of camaraderie. They are given the opportunity to inspire themselves to make strenuous efforts for a better future. Beyond a shadow of a doubt, they have a propensity to get satisfaction out of realizing themselves develop and reach some of their goals and abilities. Thus, indeed, empowers themselves to show a spirit of assiduous work for their life satisfaction and country's development. By and large, people should put off the idea that the most significant improvements in the quality of people’s lives haven't already taken place.
In summary, life satisfaction and economic development are the convincing reasons for my approval. I hope that people take this writing into great consideration to gather diverse perspectives on the issue regarding the accomplishment for the most significant improvements in the people's living standard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, incidentally, look, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, in summary, such as, by and large, by the same token, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 93.0 52.1666666667 178% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3300.0 1977.66487455 167% => OK
No of words: 614.0 407.700716846 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37459283388 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.977853291 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2134388336 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460912052117 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1057.5 618.680645161 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8314273671 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.793103448 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1724137931 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89655172414 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32589859071 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088246785331 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141060107973 0.0737576698707 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234727979101 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135445720995 0.0645574589148 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 149.0 86.8835125448 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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