Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in this progressive and complicated world where we live, human life has undergone a dramatic change in the era of technology due to the modernity. In this vein, every individual should possess an exquisite characteristic- ability to make a plan- in order to overcome the problems of life. Recently, there has been a hot debate among people over the issue of whether the ability to keep a plan and organize it has a pivotal role in younger people or not. Personally speaking, I firmly hold the view that making a plan for younger people play a crucial role in their life. To support my point of view, two significant reasons are being explored in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that the reason which has made the young people create a plan for their life and is important for them lies behind the fact that organized man or woman has less stress in their life. In this line of thought, it should be noted that human beings, in particular, younger people from all corners of the globe, are striving to improve their life by making a plan. It is worth bearing in mind that making a plan for everyone is a major factor in their life and has a considerable influence on their stress. Therefore, If younger people make plans and organize them in their life, they will not run into a huge problem, and they will not be overwhelmed by stress. By way of illustration, During my study at the university, I always made a plan for my courses to got a better performance at the end of the term. So, making a plan in my study paly a vital role not only in getting a good score but also reduce my stress during the term.
What is more, it is no secret to anyone that because of the complexity in the world, people should equip themselves with plan and idea in their life since it helps them to be success shortly. To be more specific, it is believed by many people that in the last decade, people have been looking for ways to become successful in the future, so one of the most conspicuous ways is, they should make a plan for themselves. The younger people like to create a plan for their future so that they can reach success in their life. Therefore, young people are inclined to be a successful man or woman in their life by making a better plan. To put it into a more obvious picture, my personal experience can shed light on the importance of making a plan. Having compared my sister with my younger brother, a huge gap can be noticed in their lifestyle concerning the impact and influence of ability to make a plan. While my sister always has a plan for their life, she always has a sense of satisfaction and as a result in all of her work; I can observe the success. But, my brother is always in trouble due to the lack of any plan in his life.
In conclusion, given the reasons mentioned, I firmly believe that it is essential for younger people to maintain the plan for their life. This is because it helps them to reduce their stress and be a successful person in their life.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 85.0 52.1666666667 163% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2481.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 562.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41459074733 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86893614481 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47968979174 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430604982206 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 792.9 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.4585650342 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.142857143 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7619047619 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221568250022 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877728175942 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464423105888 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164961975168 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135035971677 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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