Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Every coin has its two faces, as the saying goes. there are both positive and negative aspects of getting independence from parents too early. If I were asked to choose, I would prefer to live with families for a longer time. there is a myriad of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, living with parents for a longer time is more fun. For example, last month I went to a movie with my parents; had a lot of fun. Which was also a kind of stress buster. As I was very much tired of working at the computer always, going out with parents makes me happy, but I have a friend who stays away from her parents, feels sad most of the time. she says that she feels bored as no one is there for her to accompany. Many times I saw her crying and asked her to join my family whenever we go out.
Secondly, I feel very happy to share my thoughts. I share everything with my parents and it feels so good to think that my parents are there with me always even in my worst situations.
Last but not least, parents need their children when they get old. In my country children live with parents for a long period. they are the ones who brought us into this world. we should take the responsibility to take care of them the way they used to care. my father and mother worked very hard to provide me a good education and I feel contentful when I take care of them. To illustrate, my mother was not well a few months ago, she suffered a lot at that and I was there to help her out in cooking and other domestic works. she felt very proud and that makes me happy.
parents are the one who always thinks about our growth. so, we have to stay with them. staying with parents for a long time makes you a better person because they always correct us when we are long and show the path of success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... has its two faces, as the saying goes. there are both positive and negative aspects ...
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Suggestion: There
...o live with families for a longer time. there is a myriad of reasons and I will devel...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ovie with my parents; had a lot of fun. Which was also a kind of stress buster. As I ...
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...er parents, feels sad most of the time. she says that she feels bored as no one is ...
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...en live with parents for a long period. they are the ones who brought us into this w...
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...care of them the way they used to care. my father and mother worked very hard to p...
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Suggestion: She
...ut in cooking and other domestic works. she felt very proud and that makes me happy...
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Suggestion: Parents
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...one who always thinks about our growth. so, we have to stay with them. staying wit...
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... growth. so, we have to stay with them. staying with parents for a long time makes you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i feel, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17796610169 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1610834154 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528248587571 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6296518234 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2272727273 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105064696595 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034598951532 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323991188366 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657428041504 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249264362514 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 10.9000537634 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.