TPO 48- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Nowadays, due to the great development happened in the world, so much task has been emerged for individuals to be done. Variety of choices are available for us to be made in order to shape our life. However, what can be a guidance light in these hustle and bustle. Obviously, planning is the best tool to help us have a well-managed life. I do support this idea that plan and organization are indispensable for people, specially, younger ones. As following, I provide a couple of reasons to advocate my opinion.
First, it's worth to mention that planning and finding a proper way to organize the different parts of the life can avoid wasting time. In fact, a person who has a plan is well aware that when is appropriate to do what. He can do all the task in the proper time and he would not lose even a single hour. Hence, time is saved for more task to be done. For example, when I was preparing myself for TOEFL, at first, I didn't organize my task also have any plan to start from what book or how much of the book should be read per day. Consequently, as time passed I lost a lot of days that could be crucial and determining in my process of progression. There for, this taught me that if I had a plan I would use the time and days in a better way. However, it became a good experience for me to organize my time and task after that.
Secondly, it can come to mind that avoiding to have plan and schedule can readily bring about to forget to do some significant work. Having a plan means that you have a comprehensive schema of the whole things you have to do and besides the available time you have for them. Though, people would not lose any task that might be disguised in the flood of important works, Specially, when they are pretty busy and stuck in a hard situation that has kept their mind involved.
For example, my husband was going through expanding his firm. He was so busy with a plenty of different issues and didn't have time to even have meal with me let alone other things. In spite of all these occupations he managed to spend a specific time in the day to organize and enhance his plan. As a result, he could successfully do all his task and the great deal of expansion, without losing any single work. As a matter of fact, my husband owed his success to his plans.
To sum it up, the significance of having a plan and organization in life is cleared above. Actually, as we all know that time flies, a plan can help us not to waste it and exploit it properly. Even more, by having a plan we can identify our tasks and don't lose them because of mind occupation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...preparing myself for TOEFL, at first, I didnt organize my task also have any plan to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ze my time and task after that. Secondly, it can come to mind that avoid...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoiding having'.
Suggestion: avoiding having
... Secondly, it can come to mind that avoiding to have plan and schedule can readily bring abo...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...y with a plenty of different issues and didnt have time to even have meal with me let...
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Suggestion: don't
...ng a plan we can identify our tasks and dont lose them because of mind occupation. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, consequently, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33537832311 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47163051239 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480572597137 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1484622708 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.56 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191160299411 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588469686393 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515285440107 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123089339514 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037619721073 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.