Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because our society today is just so busy and crowded, we should not expect people to be polite to one another.
No one can deny the fact that today’s society is fast-paced, which leads many to believe that people should not have the expectation of others being polite to each other. In my opinion, this is reasonably true because we should first behave mannerly before wanting others to be polite to us, and also, politeness is merely one way of social interaction and does not have any concrete meaning in deciding whether a person is good or not.
To begin with, one should first demonstrate politeness to others if one wishes to be treated politely because the show of politeness is reciprocal. Because today’s society is somewhat indifferent, most people would only reflect on what they receive and show them in their behavior. In other words, when people receive politeness, respect, or kindness, they would be more likely to act out these merits and influence others in this way. Therefore, anyone who desires others to be polite should be the one doing this as an example. For example, I always wanted to live in a world of politeness, so I showed politeness to others. As time passed, I found out that not only had I influenced people around me, like my neighbors, into more polite people, but I had also created happy moments for strangers. If I had just wanted other people to be more polite without actually taking any action, I would not have been able to change the world around me into what I what.
Moreover, even though it is generally good that people are polite to each other, it is only a lifestyle that has no actual meaning in telling whether a person is virtuous or vices. A person can have the best behavior and still do many evil deeds, while a seemingly rude and ribald person can be warm and helpful. Thus, there is no necessity to expect people to be polite to each other. For example, my mother and I went on a group trip several years ago, and in that group, there was a woman who constantly spat gum on the floor, which was quite impolite in our eyes, so we had a bad impression of her. However, when we needed help in lifting heavy packages, she was actually very willing to provide help. This event totally changed how my mother and I viewed the importance of politeness and taught us a great lesson.
In conclusion, it is unnecessary to expect others to be polite because people should first change their behavior before expecting others, and politeness is not an essential measurement.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Many people nowadays spend too much money on their pets dogs cats or other animals although there are better uses for their money 72
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because our society today is just so busy and crowded we should not expect people to be polite to one another 85
- do you agree or disagree with the following statement People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different from what they do at work 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because our society today is just so busy and crowded we should not expect people to be polite to one another 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66978922717 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51746963495 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510538641686 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3579992736 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.625 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6875 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.45110844103 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291067724398 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108837792849 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729982072895 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199785933128 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411461767082 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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