Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Being creative rather than planning carefully will come up with the best solution to a problem.
In this fast changing society, the complexity of almost everything increases at an accelerating rate. it becomes inevitable for people to encounter various problems every now and then. Facing these challenges, more and more people are trying to get prepared for everything they can think of, just like the old saying goes, always be prepared and there will be nothing to be worried about. However, consider the limited outcome this approach can bring, I choose to think creatively instead of planing carefully. And my viewpoint is based on the following reasons and examples.
First, thinking creatively can bring unexpected consequences. In modern society, people use all kinds of method to predict the developing trends of everything, to make precautions of all those tendencies, considering this as the only way to avoid failure. There is no doubt that in this way people may success and get what they desire, and in most cases, it turns out that this is also what they’ll only get, for lacking the process to think creatively, regularity can never be broken. Taking myself for example, one time our music professor gave us an assignment which is to describe a certain style of music by a presentation. Instead of giving a slide or a video presentation like the other groups did, I came up with an idea which received positive feedback from both the professor and the other classmates, that is to play a mini music drama in order to illustrate opera.
Second, being creative can help us get through unstable situation. Due to the limitation of time and attention, we can’t always be prepared for every occasions that might happen to our lives. When it comes to a situation we haven’t been able to prepare for yet, creativity will be critical to help us to overcome it. Imagine such a scene, you worked hard for a whole month to get ready for an important job interview, you even planned for everything including your gestures, your introduction, your description of your resume, but how can you predict every single question the interviewer may ask and answer them all perfectly? That is when creativity comes to help.
Granted, I’m not denying the necessity of planning, since opportunity favors only the prepared mind. Nevertheless, trying too hard to prepare for every details may yield a counterproductive result, for you will probably get panic and lose your direction when things develop in an unexpected way, which will definitely lead to failure.
In short, being creative plays a more important role in coming up the best solution of a problem. For it can not only result in an outcome which may surprise ourselves but also improve our ability to embrace the various challenges, to face the changeable world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lose your direction when things develop in an unexpected way, which will definitely lead to failure....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, nevertheless, second, so, then, for example, in short, no doubt, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02407002188 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8233727892 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562363238512 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0633997827 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.842105263 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0526315789 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153756780364 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547415131062 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644525734175 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914393335697 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411456865544 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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