Which do you prefer? Some people would like to upload pictures and other information on social networking websites while others do not like to create such records.
With the development of the internet, people can spread information to almost any corner of the world. It becomes more and more convenient for us to share all kinds of things including pictures and other knowledge. Thus, a heated debate has arisen among the public about whether should people upload pictures and other information on social networking websites or they shouldn’t. As for me, I prefer the former option. My reasons and examples are given below.
First, sharing things on social networking websites can help maintain our relationships with others. A big advantage of using the internet is that we can communicate with people regardless of the distance between us. By posting pictures and other information about us give those who we have relationship with an opportunity to learn the life situation of us, and also an approach interact with us. Taking myself for example, I get to go home only twice a year because my hometown is far from campus. I can’t imagine what will happen if I just stop posting pictures of me and my life on the social media, for it is an essential way for my distant families and friends get to know what’s been happening about my life. By those comments they leave below my posts, I can know about them as well.
Second, uploading information on the website can help transmitting useful knowledge and right beliefs. In the past, without the internet, people can acquire limited information due to the lack of effective spreading approach. Nonetheless, by using the internet, we can search for any resources or even learn unexpected information as long as they’re accessible. Either the amount or the accessibility of information has changed completely, only if someone has uploaded these messages. Imagine such a scene, if no one is willing to record anything on the websites, it’ll gradually leave our generation nothing but a bank space of our lives.
Admittedly, I’m not saying that we can upload anything we want or we can trust everything we learn from the internet. Fault information is inevitable if everyone from any stages can possess the access to upload things on it. Thus, it becomes more important for us to have the ability to identify the genuine information from those fabricated ones.
To put it in a nutshell, the benefits uploading photos and information on the networking websites overweight its harm. For sharing information is a characteristic of the modern world, and it is exactly what makes the world a much better one than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to transmit' or 'transmit'.
Suggestion: to transmit; transmit
...ing information on the website can help transmitting useful knowledge and right beliefs. In ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nonetheless, second, so, thus, well, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90236435012 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4092456292 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.952380952 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158915308162 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547411464577 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532133055113 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105489614535 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576015404642 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.