Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best things in life are free. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
In today’s global world, people have a plethora of options around them to make them feel better. But most of the things in this world have a cost. However, the best things in life are free. And there are a lot of reasons for that.
Firstly, every man wants to be happy and happiness doesn’t have a price associated with it. It is up to a person to look into himself and achieve his inner peace. The Buddhist monks don’t live a lavish lifestyle but they are happy and peaceful with themselves and the people around themselves. When a person is happy with himself, he tends to share his happiness with others. In my case, I tend to live cheerfully because I have a lot to give and when I don’t love myself I won’t be able to love others. Problems are a part of everyone’s life and one is able to solve it better when they are happy. If the great scientist Einstein wasn’t happy with himself or his work, he wouldn’t have been able to give his theory of general theory of relativity to the mankind.
Secondly, knowledge too doesn’t come with any cost involved with it. Most of the situations requires a certain degree of knowledge and wisdom comes from knowledge. Elder people have so much knowledge, that they are able to guide other people to solve their problems in life. Imagination is what makes one wonder. Without knowing about a certain event or a thing, one cannot imagine about it. For instance, when a student learns something, he imagines about that subject. That unlocks his ability to see beyond what is visible to our eyes.
In conclusion, the beautiful things in life do not come with any cost. Happiness and knowledge are wonderful and inherent things but they don’t have a price tag associated with them. Thus, it is of utmost importance that people focus more on the things that are inside them rather than outside.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... happy and peaceful with themselves and the people around themselves. When a person is happy with himself, h...
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Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...apos;s life and one is able to solve it better when they are happy. If the great scien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74848484848 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61932669974 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0120693531 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.619047619 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118902322499 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486102177047 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686508552602 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939583757522 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454213346827 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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