Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in today’s sophisticated world, traveling as a way for relieving the mind and easing the stress resulting from the hustle and bustle of life is of paramount importance to individuals. In this regard, there exists a debate among people as to whether or not they could maximally enjoy a trip if they traveled with a guided tour. Personally, I hold the view that taking a trip with a tour group provides more benefits for individuals in order to enjoy their trips. In the following paragraphs, two reasons to corroborate my idea are provided.
To begin with, taking a trip with a tour group can be more cost-effective than traveling on an individual’s own. In the progressive world in which we live, people are striving to effectively manage their financial budget, thereby making their life more convenient. Given that a guided tour preschedules the plan of the trip, including choosing the route, reserving a hotel, determining the places worthwhile to visit, and to name but a few, it can optimize the costs of the trip in order to captivate people to take a trip with them. Moreover, going on a journey regularly and having more experience, a guided tour is familiar with the journey process and can avoid unexpected travel expenses. Therefore, considering traveling with a tour group can benefit individuals to financially manage their trips and save their money.
Secondly, traveling with a guided tour provide individuals with the opportunity to make new friends. In personal life, one needs to make friends and communicates with them to deal with various concerns and problems of daily life. Indeed, everyone needs friends who stand by his or her side in sadness and happiness. However, because of being surrounded by a large number of activities and works, the only people whom one meets in daily life are just his or her family and co-workers. Therefore, planning a trip with a guided tour provides ones with the opportunity not only to take a break from the job, the routine, and the demands of life but also to meet new people and try to form friendships with some of them. My experience of traveling with a tour and form a friendship with a person, who is now one of my best friends, can be a compelling example of this. Two years ago, I finally got a chance to take a tour-based trip to one of the historical and spectacular places in my country. During that three-day trip, I met a person, and we had plenty of interests in common, which led us to be friends. Fortunately, our friendship has lasted until now, and we still have a deeply intimate friendship. If I had not traveled with that group tour, I might not have met her in my life.
In conclusion, although some people prefer to plan a trip on their own, considering the reasons mentioned above, I am of the opinion that not only can traveling with a guided tour be economical and help us to manage our travel expenses effectively but also it causes us to have an opportunity to meet with new people and make new friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...However, because of being surrounded by a large number of activities and works, the only people w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70765661253 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79255134817 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470997679814 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3263080738 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8125 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9375 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173693328603 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727968455165 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582225488404 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130674298562 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00864520271348 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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