Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Studies have shown that modern humans carry much more stress than their grandparents. Anxiety is a significant part of our daily life, and it can reduce workers' efficiency. To get relief from pressure, people should relax. There are several ways to have a relaxing time. Although some people may believe that relaxing alone is helpful, I believe it is better to have some people around. I have two reasons for my opinion, which I will explain in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, being alone increases stress. According to the studies, people tend to think about their problems when they are alone. It is challenging to keep the mind busy at lonely times. When the mind has nothing to process, it goes back to undone tasks and starts to process them. Starting to think about unfinished stuff causes stress, and the fact that you are not doing anything about them at the time amplifies the tension. People can efface these thoughts by spending time with others and keeping their minds busy with communicating. For instance, I had an important exam and had been studying hard for it. I decided to have a day off from studying and rest. I went to a jungle to relax. But, when I started relaxing, all I could think about was my test. I had nothing else to think about.
Furthermore, being alone causes depression. The human being is a social creature. He finds peaces and comfort in connecting with other people. People tend to share their good times with others. When they spend their relaxing time on their own, they are growing the idea that they have no one to have fun with. Feeling alone is the first step of depression. Relaxing alone can be helpful one or two times. But, it can cause depression and mental issues when it happens more. For instance, a guy in our office tried to travel alone to find peace. He said he was ok for the fist two days. But, as time goes, he started to feel depressed. He had no one to have lunch or take a photo with. It was so hard for him that he canceled the rest of his reservation and came back home. He said the trip didn't help him at all.
In conclusion, not only will relaxing alone not help to reduce stress, but also it can cause depression and more anxiety. With a group of people, it is much easier to reach a peaceful mind.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
... when they are alone. It is challenging to keep the mind busy at lonely times. When the...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 791, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...on and came back home. He said the trip didnt help him at all. In conclusion, not on...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 30, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'relax'
Suggestion: relax
...m at all. In conclusion, not only will relaxing alone not help to reduce stress, but al...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50843373494 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34686919865 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525301204819 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6265014283 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.696969697 100.406767564 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5757575758 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15151515152 5.45110844103 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171517805028 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441164751 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445544979203 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11361868467 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150466699671 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 11.7677419355 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.99 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
... when they are alone. It is challenging to keep the mind busy at lonely times. When the...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 791, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...on and came back home. He said the trip didnt help him at all. In conclusion, not on...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 30, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'relax'
Suggestion: relax
...m at all. In conclusion, not only will relaxing alone not help to reduce stress, but al...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50843373494 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34686919865 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525301204819 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6265014283 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.696969697 100.406767564 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5757575758 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15151515152 5.45110844103 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171517805028 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441164751 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445544979203 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11361868467 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150466699671 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 11.7677419355 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.99 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.